- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Huip
- Nominated by: Jedi Sarith LeKit (talk) 23:20, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: I recently discovered the Planet Hoppers articles and the slew of planets mentioned across them, and since so many aren't mentioned anywhere else, I've begun a conquest of those in the Beheboth system. I'll hold off on the other planets' articles so I can make sure not to repeat any potential objections with this one.
- Date Archived: 04:07, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- Final word count: 118 words (0 introduction, 48 body, 70 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 74 words (0 introduction, 33 body, 41 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST
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Support
Nice work. Imperators II(Talk) 19:55, 28 December 2024 (UTC)- Lewisr (talk) 03:57, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
- —spookywillowwtalk 04:06, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
Object
Imp
Right now, you're noting in the infobox that Huip had no moons. That should also be mentioned in the article's body.Imperators II(Talk) 07:46, 28 December 2024 (UTC)- Done. Jedi Sarith LeKit (talk) 19:47, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
Comments
- You can probably add that it's located in the Trailing Sectors. —DKS MaXoO (talk) 02:10, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yeah, per DKS MaXoO. Here's the ref note:
{{SW|url=news/star-wars-the-essential-atlas-online-companion|text=''Star Wars: The Essential Atlas'' Online Companion|int=Star Wars: The Essential Atlas Online Companion}} places the [[Beheboth system/Legends|Beheboth system]], and therefore Huip, in the [[Sanbra sector/Legends|Sanbra sector]], which {{SW|url=news/essential-atlas-outer-rim-sectors|text=The Essential Atlas Extra: Outer Rim Sectors|int=Star Wars: The Essential Atlas Online Companion}} in turn places in what ''[[The Essential Atlas]]'' designates as the [[Trailing Sectors/Legends|Trailing Sectors]].Also add the Category:Trailing Sectors astronomical objects category and work in a note in the body that the system was situated "in the Trailing Sectors portion of the Outer Rim Territories". Imperators II(Talk) 07:44, 28 December 2024 (UTC)- Thanks, added all of that in. I slightly rearranged the wording, so let me know if you think anything still needs to be changed. Jedi Sarith LeKit (talk) 19:47, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- Great job. Don't forget to add it in the infobox as well. —DKS MaXoO (talk) 03:49, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks, just did. Jedi Sarith LeKit (talk) 19:46, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Great job. Don't forget to add it in the infobox as well. —DKS MaXoO (talk) 03:49, 29 December 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks, added all of that in. I slightly rearranged the wording, so let me know if you think anything still needs to be changed. Jedi Sarith LeKit (talk) 19:47, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
- Yeah, per DKS MaXoO. Here's the ref note:
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 04:06, 30 December 2024 (UTC)