Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Guardstar

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Contents

  • 1 Guardstar
    • 1.1 (4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 Spooky
        • 1.1.2.2 UberSoldat
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Guardstar

  • Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 18:09, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Ambition

(4 ECs/2 Users/6 Total)

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Support

  1. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 04:13, 18 April 2022 (UTC)
  2. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 11:22, 19 April 2022 (UTC)
  3. ECvote LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 06:05, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
  4. —spookywillowwtalk 17:03, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 23:27, 22 April 2022 (UTC)
  6. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:41, 24 April 2022 (UTC)

Object

Spooky
  • Seems like there's some repeat referencing issues in the second paragraph: unsure if those were meant to be under one instance of ref1, or different ones for each.
    • Darn, erroneously wrote the second reference incorrectly. Fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:20, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
  • With a bit of fiddling—it might be possible to cut down on a bit of the mentions of years. If the first was turned into 'during the Imperial Era' or something else, it'd leave the other two free to be 'in 3 ABY'/'that year'. If you think it's alright it is technically fine and can strike, but it does read repetitively to me.—spookywillowwtalk 20:55, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Reworded. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 21:26, 17 April 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat
  • No author? UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 03:47, 18 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Added. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 04:05, 18 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 21:41, 24 April 2022 (UTC)