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Glarus Lagoons
- Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 01:48, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
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- Date Archived: 11:23, 11 February 2023 (UTC)
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Support
- Herasoars(comms) 04:34, 1 February 2023 (UTC)
- - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 04:46, 2 February 2023 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 05:18, 2 February 2023 (UTC)- VergenceScatter (talk) 19:01, 6 February 2023 (UTC)
- Manoof (he/him/his)
11:22, 11 February 2023 (UTC)
Object
DFaceG
Use of "along with" in the last sentence implies that we know for sure it was destroyed with Alderaan, when we don't know for sure—it could have been destroyed prior. "By 0 BBY" is good though, don't change that bit.- Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 07:06, 29 January 2023 (UTC)- I'm admittedly not sure how to reword it. It's the same way on Istabith Falls and Istabith range—mainly owing to that it says "By 0 BBY" not "In 0 BBY", which would mean it was destroyed along with Alderaan by at least 0 BBY with the world, but, leaving open that it could've been destroyed otherwise prior by something else.—spookywillowwtalk 20:09, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
- Try "The Glarus Lagoons were destroyed by 0 BBY, when the rest of Alderaan was destroyed..." - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 23:35, 30 January 2023 (UTC)
- Tweaked, though skirted around using destroyed twice for a sentence.—spookywillowwtalk 03:47, 1 February 2023 (UTC)
- Try "The Glarus Lagoons were destroyed by 0 BBY, when the rest of Alderaan was destroyed..." - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 23:35, 30 January 2023 (UTC)
- I'm admittedly not sure how to reword it. It's the same way on Istabith Falls and Istabith range—mainly owing to that it says "By 0 BBY" not "In 0 BBY", which would mean it was destroyed along with Alderaan by at least 0 BBY with the world, but, leaving open that it could've been destroyed otherwise prior by something else.—spookywillowwtalk 20:09, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
Kris
For consistency's sake, I think you should link "swimming areas" the same in both the infobox and the body! This is purely for aesthetic, I think the rest looks great.Herasoars(comms) 21:14, 31 January 2023 (UTC)- Done.—spookywillowwtalk 03:47, 1 February 2023 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps Manoof (he/him/his) 11:22, 11 February 2023 (UTC)