Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Gangi Moon

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Gangi Moon

• Nominated by: Dropbearemma (she/her) 08:51, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:35, 19 December 2022 (UTC)
2. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 11:32, 19 December 2022 (UTC)
3. —spookywilloww^talk 03:26, 20 December 2022 (UTC)
4. Fan26 (Talk) 16:52, 21 December 2022 (UTC)
5. might as well BloodOfIrizi (talk) 00:13, 23 December 2022 (UTC)

Object

Imp

• Could you please create an article for B2EMO's model? Imperators II^(Talk) 11:36, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
  • I had such a miserable time doing this, which is probably why no one else did it first: Groundmech salvage assist unit. Please, star wars, I am rattling the cage, tell us more about groundmech salvage assist units. Dropbearemma (she/her) 04:28, 19 December 2022 (UTC)

Ziara

• the term "Ferrixian" is never used in the episode and therefore cant be sourced to it. off the top of my head you could use Episode 12 AD or Brasso's databank, both of them use the term
• the second setence is a run-on, please break it up
• context for Rix Road riot BloodOfIrizi (talk) 15:35, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
  • Ooof I had not realised how horrendous the run-on was, thank you! I... attempted to fix it, but I'm not sure I actually succeeded.
  • I've sourced 'Ferrixian', but I'm curious -- we don't usually source other demonyms except in the infobox of the planet articles, no? Or is this a best practice I haven't noticed? Also, is that the context you want for the riot? Dropbearemma (she/her) 04:28, 19 December 2022 (UTC)
    • You should only reference it to a different source if the episode doesn't establish that Jezzi was from Ferrix. Same as how when we'd use a separate ref for, say, "Tatooinian", we'd be doing so only because the other source doesn't establish the individual was from Tatooine, and not because the word "Tatooinian" specifically wasn't used in it. Imperators II^(Talk) 09:38, 19 December 2022 (UTC)
      • She's clearly one of the Daughters of Ferrix in that ep, so do you think I still need a separate citation or go back to sourcing it to Rix Road? Dropbearemma (she/her) 10:34, 19 December 2022 (UTC)

Braha

• The reference in the BtS only covers the release date. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 09:50, 19 December 2022 (UTC)
  • Does that help? Dropbearemma (she/her) 10:34, 19 December 2022 (UTC)
    • Yeah that's sound. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 10:41, 19 December 2022 (UTC)
• Can Pegla get some context in the quote attribs as well, since that's his sole mention? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 10:41, 19 December 2022 (UTC)
  • Edited - I feel like it would sound more natural after his name but I don't know how that works with the quote citation? It's not clear who he is in the episode itself. Dropbearemma (she/her) 11:24, 19 December 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 10:15, 23 December 2022 (UTC)