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Fritzle Fries
- Nominated by: Immi Thrax
(talk) 04:30, 16 August 2021 (UTC) - Nomination comments: Why make fries out of batter instead of potato?
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- LucaRoR (Talk) 08:32, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
- —spookywillowwtalk 18:30, 18 August 2021 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 19:04, 18 August 2021 (UTC)- I'd go to Galaxy's Edge just for the food. Dentface (talk) 19:58, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
- UberSoldat93
(talk) 07:59, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
Object
Luca
You reference this sentence: "that was served at Freerago's Satellite Diner and Motel as it orbited the planet Hosnian Prime" to the third reference, which I don't think is correct.LucaRoR (Talk) 08:05, 16 August 2021 (UTC)- Fixed, thank you! Rearranging led to losing the ref and I didn't catch it. Immi Thrax (talk) 08:22, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
- Fixed, thank you! Rearranging led to losing the ref and I didn't catch it. Immi Thrax
Spooky
I think that the coloring of the snack could be added under physical description."He enjoyed fritzle fries with sandwiches and recommended seasoning them with his Nerfsteak Seasoning, dipping them in Emulsauce, or serving them as a side dish with his Fried Endorian Tip-Yip." - Could this be slightly tweaked to clarify that Tuggs was the one who enjoyed them? Though a scan of the cookbook makes that clear, from reading it it seems as if "He" could be referring to Freerago as well."As the events at Freerago's Satellite Diner and Motel in Last Shot occur "about ten years ago," they must take place around 3 BBY.", however, in the article body, the events are settled "in BBY". The article body should be made to match the ref note unless the novel can be pinned firmly to the year, in which case the opposite would be tweaked.Bit picky, but I think context for Freerago's Satellite Diner and Motel could be squeezed in as a restaurant or something within the sentence it's linked in.—spookywillowwtalk 19:52, 16 August 2021 (UTC)- Done x4, but let me know if what's done doesn't work as done :) Immi Thrax (talk) 21:17, 16 August 2021 (UTC)
- Done x4, but let me know if what's done doesn't work as done :) Immi Thrax
Batter can be included as an ingredient in the infobox.- I went further and removed it from the body because the IU description doesn't mention "batter" after all, just the OOU recipe.
""Vegetarian" as a term isn't found to the cookbook entry for the fries - despite the OOU ingredients, I don't think it's estanlishable off the IU known ingredients that its necessarily that since it doesn't specify what's in it's batter.—spookywillowwtalk 05:31, 17 August 2021 (UTC)- Revised to be in the BTS not the IU as discussed on Discord :) Immi Thrax (talk) 04:25, 18 August 2021 (UTC)
- Revised to be in the BTS not the IU as discussed on Discord :) Immi Thrax
UberSoldat
OOM's objection regarding capitalization applies here.UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:48, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
- Case lowered. Immi Thrax (talk) 07:56, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
- Case lowered. Immi Thrax
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 07:59, 23 August 2021 (UTC)