Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Fraser Kelly

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Fraser Kelly

  • Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 16:26, July 19, 2018 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: he was interesting to find info on

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 18:18, July 19, 2018 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 09:52, August 6, 2018 (UTC)
  3. ECvote 1358 (Talk) 10:13, August 24, 2018 (UTC)

Object

Tommy
  • Please create the imagecat.
  • Does the actual quote say "Ron Howards"? Because his name is Ron Howard, so either you need to change it or you need to add "[sic]" after it. Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 17:13, July 19, 2018 (UTC)
    • Altered; since he does say Ron Howards, so I added the [sic] —spookywillowwtalk 17:29, July 19, 2018 (UTC)
Imp
  • Eliminate all contractions. Imperators II(Talk) 10:05, July 31, 2018 (UTC)
  • "Film" should probably be used instead of "movie." Imperators II(Talk) 10:05, July 31, 2018 (UTC)
  • The Wikipedia link for the Urban thing is quite useless, being as it is about a book. Imperators II(Talk) 10:05, July 31, 2018 (UTC)
  • And please provide some contextual qualifier for the Urban thing (what is it? a film? a television series? a play?) Imperators II(Talk) 10:05, July 31, 2018 (UTC)
  • "He grew up Scunthorpe" — a word seems to be missing. Imperators II(Talk) 10:05, July 31, 2018 (UTC)
  • "Kelly auditioned for a role Solo: A Star Wars Story" — a word seems to be missing. Imperators II(Talk) 10:05, July 31, 2018 (UTC)
  • Is kinofilms.ua a more reliable resource than IMDb? Imperators II(Talk) 10:05, July 31, 2018 (UTC)
    • I'm not entirely sure because of the language barrier, so to be safe I switched it with his agent profile.—spookywillowwtalk 14:51, August 1, 2018 (UTC)
  • "after Disney acquired Lucasfilm" — this isn't exactly what the referenced source says, please find another source for this. Imperators II(Talk) 17:53, August 1, 2018 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
  • I don't think the Bibliography section is applicable in this article. If you view the relevant section of the OOU Layout Guide, you'll find that the Bibliography is reserved for non-IU works such as reference books and other such sources. Solo, on the other hand, is an IU narrative work, rendering the section unnecesssary. 1358 (Talk) 22:39, August 23, 2018 (UTC)

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