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Four-Eighteen
- Nominated by: Supreme Emperor (talk) 03:19, March 24, 2013 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:Another for project novels, this time from Rogue Squadron.
(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)
Support
501st dogma(talk) 00:15, March 29, 2013 (UTC)- Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 23:38, April 2, 2013 (UTC)
- Winterz (talk) 01:23, April 7, 2013 (UTC)
Object
- 501st
Context on Rogue Squadron.It would be nice if you added mention of the Galactic Civil war as well.- Funny enough this one popped into my head on the way to work today. I was hoping I could fix it before anyone noticed I was missing context on it :P
- Techincally, the Alliance transforms into the New Republic after 4 ABY, so the Empire is fighting the NR. That should be stated as the combatents of the Galactic Civil War here.
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- Techincally, the Alliance transforms into the New Republic after 4 ABY, so the Empire is fighting the NR. That should be stated as the combatents of the Galactic Civil War here.
- Funny enough this one popped into my head on the way to work today. I was hoping I could fix it before anyone noticed I was missing context on it :P
You could add unidentified gender and unidentified species as categories.- Added
Where exactly was the trooper killed? The raid article seems to say that the raid happened in an Alliance base, which should be mentioned.- The novel never states where he died, just that 4-18 was down. All I know for sure is that he died on that raid.
You need to mention that he was in the Stormtrooper corps in the body.501st dogma(talk) 21:45, March 24, 2013 (UTC)- Added
Link and give brief context to Loor in the quote attribution.- Linked and gave context, do I also link his name in the article or just the quote?
- Since you have his name in the article, link it and the context there instead of in the quote. 501st dogma(talk) 21:21, March 26, 2013 (UTC)
- Like this? Supreme Emperor (talk) 00:54, March 28, 2013 (UTC)
- Since you have his name in the article, link it and the context there instead of in the quote. 501st dogma(talk) 21:21, March 26, 2013 (UTC)
- Linked and gave context, do I also link his name in the article or just the quote?
- Good work. 501st dogma(talk) 21:45, March 24, 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks, Supreme Emperor (talk) 00:58, March 25, 2013 (UTC)
- CC-8
Shouldn't a nickname tag be used since this probably wasn't the guys real name?- Done
- Can you also specify that it was only a designation in the body? Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 05:53, April 1, 2013 (UTC)
- Done.
- Can you also specify that it was only a designation in the body? Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 05:53, April 1, 2013 (UTC)
- Done
Four-twenty should probably be in the body somewhere since he's mentioned in the quote.Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 00:21, March 29, 2013 (UTC)- Added Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:41, March 30, 2013 (UTC)
- Winterz
Reload infobox.- Reloaded
Does the raid have a conjectural name?- Yes
- Good work, Sup. Winterz (talk) 16:37, March 31, 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks. Supreme Emperor (talk) 20:14, April 2, 2013 (UTC)
Comments
- In general, be careful with assuming genders when there is none. It seems to be a mistake made by way too many users. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 04:56, March 27, 2013 (UTC)
- Will do. Supreme Emperor (talk) 02:42, March 30, 2013 (UTC)
- Note that when hidding content in the Infobox you should use "1" instead of "y". Winterz (talk) 16:54, March 31, 2013 (UTC)