Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Fly Fast and Die Young!

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Fly Fast and Die Young!

• Nominated by: VergenceScatter (talk) 18:30, 10 August 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: With a title like that, who wouldn't want to become a pilot?
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

1. Samonic 17:59, 15 August 2022 (UTC)
2. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 11:27, 17 August 2022 (UTC)
3. OOM 224 16:06, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
4. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:56, 24 August 2022 (UTC)

Object

Live, laugh, Braha'tok

• Context for Corellia? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 18:38, 10 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Added VergenceScatter (talk) 23:05, 10 August 2022 (UTC)
• BtS is unreferenced. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 08:41, 16 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Fixed VergenceScatter (talk) 21:43, 16 August 2022 (UTC)

Live, enlighten, die

• You provide Corellia's location but fail to specify that it's a planet.
  • Nevermind this one, I misread Core World as Core Worlds. (Maybe the second capital letter could be removed?) Samonic 18:30, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
    • Added an of that should make it a bit clearer. I'd prefer to leave it at Core Worlds, however, as that's the capitalization used in every source I've seen.
      • Fair enough. Samonic 17:59, 15 August 2022 (UTC)
• "the book" repeat in the beginning, could you introduce some variation there? Samonic 18:29, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Added. VergenceScatter (talk) 03:57, 15 August 2022 (UTC)

OOM

• More variation in language (there's a repeat of "Antilles read") would be nice OOM 224 22:00, 18 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Done VergenceScatter (talk) 15:58, 23 August 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 12:56, 24 August 2022 (UTC)