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Fleet Support Air Station

  • Nominated by: TK-462 (talk) 15:16, 12 November 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:

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Support

  1. LordMominutiae (talk) 22:44, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
  2. Winterz (talk) 15:42, 13 December 2020 (UTC)
  3. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 08:08, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 18:08, 24 December 2020 (UTC)
  5. Jedi Order ImpacticForce (Talk) 18:23, 24 December 2020 (UTC)

Object

Winterz
  • Eras can be filled.
  • Infobox should be switched to structure.
    • Fixed the above two objections. TK-462 (talk) 23:50, 7 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Are you sure we cannot say this is a space station? GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit Winterz (talk) 14:58, 7 December 2020 (UTC)
    • There's nothing in the novel that suggests that Fleet Support or any of it's auxilliary locations are located in space. Further, it's the Air Station, which isn't necessarily confirmation one way or another, but the wording contradicts any indication it's a space station. If you're interpreting it a different way though, we can definitely get it figured out. TK-462 (talk) 23:50, 7 December 2020 (UTC)
      • Nah. There's been enough "personal interpretation" lately. :P Winterz (talk) 00:19, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
  • The docking bay should be mentioned in the body and infobox.
  • I could be mistaken, but if the Air Station was used as launch station for Omega Squad's mission, then you need to expand the body. Winterz (talk) 00:28, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
    • Good points. Both objections are addressed. TK-462 (talk) 00:44, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
Imp
  • The body uses the subject's name without the definite article, but the reference note uses the article. Which one is correct?
  • I'm not seeing where exactly in The Essential Atlas does it identify Qiilura as a "world," which we take to mean "planet" by default. In the Clone Wars section, I'm seeing "on Qiilura," which implies "terrestrial astronomical object" at best. But doesn't Hard Contact itself or TERC explicitly call it a planet or a world?
  • Somewhat related to the above objection: doesn't Hard Contact place Qiilura and Ord Mantell relatively close to each other? If so, you could just skip the extra Atlas ref for Mid Rim for Qiilura and instead just say "nearby planet/world Qiilura". Imperators II(Talk) 11:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
    • I'm not finding anything in Hard Contact that states that Qiilura is in the Mid Rim. However, The Essential Reader's Companion states that Qiilura is located in grid L-7, which The Essential Atlas says Ord Mantell is also located in. Should that be the information I use to write the
    • Fixed the above three objections. Regarding the Mid Rim locations, neither Hard Contact or Reader's Companion state that either planet is in the Mid Rim, so I've pieced together information to create a ref note that's a bit more multi-purpose than what I've been doing. Thanks for catching this. TK-462 (talk) 03:59, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
      • OK, I checked the book for myself, and it says both that Ord Mantell and Qiilura are mere 40 lightyears apart and that Qiilura is a planet. So if you just say "the nearby planet Qiilura" instead of "the Mid Rim planet Qiilura", you can both make it slightly more specific and eliminate the extra ref there, sourcing everything to the novel. And in that case you can change the manual ref note back to the simple TEA ref for Ord Mantell. Imperators II(Talk) 08:39, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
        • Yep, I saw both of those details in the book as well. Even though "the nearby planet Qiilura" doesn't necessarily mean that it's in the Mid Rim, is the phrasing still at an acceptable level of detail for this article? TK-462 (talk) 14:44, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
          • Fixed. TK-462 (talk) 02:52, 24 December 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 19:15, 24 December 2020 (UTC)