Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Ferrix shuttle port

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Ferrix shuttle port

  • Nominated by: AxMech (talk) 19:09, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Another one for the shuttle ferry saga
  • Date Archived: 03:26, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 160 words (0 introduction, 129 body, 31 behind the scenes)
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Support

Object

Lew
  • Context for Cassian Lewisr (talk) 19:15, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
    • Added
  • The BTS needs a little work, currently it's citing all of the first sentence to the trailer Lewisr (talk) 19:15, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
  • The first sentence of the body is citing everything to the episode "Kassa," please fix Lewisr (talk) 23:35, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
    • Done
  • The episode doesn't identiy Ferrix as a planet Lewisr (talk) 23:35, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
    • Added ref
  • I don't believe Luthen's pronouns are citable to the episode Lewisr (talk) 23:35, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
    • Added ref
  • Is Luthen being a spymaster established in the episode? Lewisr (talk) 23:35, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
    • Kinda? Luthen being a spymaster is implied by him being Bix's contact and his secretive actions on the starship.
  • 'It was identified and located in the same episode by Luthen Rael' can you clarify what this means, especially the 'located in' please? Lewisr (talk) 23:35, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
    • Reworded
  • Also regarding the above objection, if it was identified then does it need the conjecture tag? Lewisr (talk) 23:35, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
    • It was identified as a "station 2.3 klicks out of town". Through its use by shuttle ferries of the Entry Ferry service it is implied that it's not a "unidentified station (Ferrix)", but rather a ""shuttle ferry station", hence the conjecture tagAxMech (talk) 00:01, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
      • I only meant identified in the sense that it was suggesting it was specifically called a "Ferrix shuttle station" in the episode, which appears to not be the case, so that should bit should be taken out. I also think noting its precise location was established in the BTS should be removed because the body already makes this clear Lewisr (talk) 00:30, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
        • Removed redundant informationAxMech (talk) 11:07, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Have you checked the audio description incase it has anything? Lewisr (talk) 23:35, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
    • Very little info, added
      • In the interests of using less references, does the AD call Ferrix a planet? Lewisr (talk) 14:44, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
        • It mentions that Rael's ship is orbiting and landing to a planet, presumably Ferrix, so I used thatAxMech (talk) 18:12, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Would be worthwhile to look at this list to see for sources Lewisr (talk) 23:35, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
    • Nothing hereAxMech (talk) 11:12, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
      • Before indicating that an objection is solved, please make sure to check places where something is likely to be, including the corresponding episode guide for every episode. In this case, it's definitely pictured in the episode guide and missing from sources. I ask you to again check the sources, I would recommend paying especial attention to the background of shots in the event it is there Lewisr (talk) 16:33, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
        • Sorry, I missed that one. I double-checked the yt videos and I really can't see it in any shot, neither do I have access to Insider so that's as far as I can goAxMech (talk) 22:27, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
          • Did check the Insider ones, and it's not in either. The shuttle port can be seen in the Andor trailer at 1.14. Would be worth therefore seeing which other sources from this list might have it in Lewisr (talk) 01:34, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
  • (Reviewing note) Reminder that for sources like Insider that have information, you can always ask someone to check them for you, but you should not indicate that they're checked if you don't have access to them/could not check them. I'm happy to check sources if you don't have them, but you need to ask or indicate as much first Lewisr (talk) 02:44, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Per precedent you need to link to the specific slide in the story gallery reference, and in the sources you need to list the episode guide instead of the gallery Lewisr (talk) 23:34, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
    • The reference already linked to the specific slide. I added the ep guide link to the sources as wellAxMech (talk) 18:09, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
      • Sorry what I meant was for it to be like this in regards to the slide Lewisr (talk) 04:44, 20 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Do the shuttle stations appear in "Reckoning" also? Since your apps section lists that episode whereas the rest of the article talks about "That Would Be Me." Or was this just an error? Lewisr (talk) 15:08, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
    • No idea what happened here. FixedAxMech (talk) 19:28, 28 October 2023 (UTC)
Fan
  • The bit about the antennae does not belong tacked onto the end of the sentence it's in right now. Move it to the subsequent sentence about the shuttle capacity-both pieces of information are about the stations' physical description so work together better than having the bit about the antennae tacked on awkwardly at the end of an already long sentence about the stations' purpose. Fan26 (Talk) 23:39, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
    • RewordedAxMech (talk) 00:01, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
Anil
  • (Reviewing note) Smaller works that are part of larger work, such as episodes of a series, are usually rendered in between quotation marks instead of italics.
  • (Reviewing note) Per the Manual of Style, subjects should be linked once upon their first mention in individual references as well.
  • I think the type and affiliation fields of the infobox can list "Shuttle station" and "Ferrix Entry Ferry Service," respectively. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 23:40, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
    • There was a mention of the EFS in the affiliations field originally, but I couldn't find a reliable source from any of the episodes so I removed it. We know that the ferries belong to the company, but we don't know what the stations areAxMech (talk) 00:01, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
spookly
  • It's generally preferable to leave a more condensed ref note that reads something similar to—"The events of "Reckoning" take place in 5 BBY per the reasoning here." To keep things consistent, most everything, unless it's in only the first episode that dates itself, uses the established template.—spookywillowwtalk 23:47, 17 October 2023 (UTC)
    • I was looking for this template, thanks for pointing it out!AxMech (talk) 00:01, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
DFaceG
  • Review note: Changed "aired" to "released" simply because "aired" sort of implies that the episode was broadcasted live. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 03:41, 11 November 2023 (UTC)
  • The page should just be named "shuttle port;" target namespace is empty and the source the name is cited to doesn't include "Ferrix" in the name. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 03:41, 11 November 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (EC only)

  1. ECvote Unaddressed objection for 16 days Lewisr (talk) 03:23, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
  2. ECvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 03:23, 12 November 2023 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Belated note for whenever this goes up next, from conversing with other ECs, that it might be better to rework page to be a page for the one specific shuttle port we see. Otherwise its just like any other spaceport and thus non-noteable if not about only the one, similar to the unidentified Eighth family stronghold TC recently.—spookywillowwtalk 03:25, 12 November 2023 (UTC)