Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Elpfel

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Elpfel

• Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 13:23, 4 August 2022 (UTC)
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Support

1. Samonic 13:26, 5 August 2022 (UTC)
2. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 01:06, 10 August 2022 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:04, 10 August 2022 (UTC)
4. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 18:58, 10 August 2022 (UTC)
5. OOM 224 20:50, 10 August 2022 (UTC)

Object

Samonic

• Shouldn't Elpfel's physical appearance be at the end of the article?
  • For articles without sectioning, that doesn't have to be at the end.
• In the infobox, you say "Mottled brown" and in the body, you say "brown–mottled." Could you choose one of these and say that one in the infobox and in the body for consistency?
  • Done. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:03, 4 August 2022 (UTC)
• "Elpfel was created by 1997's Star Wars Trilogy Sourcebook, Special Edition," The book created the character? Samonic 15:00, 4 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Yes, because the character didn't exist before the book. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:02, 4 August 2022 (UTC)
    • I meant that the book literally created the character instead of the book's writers.
      • Reworded. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 18:11, 4 August 2022 (UTC)

Macaroni

• Can you please reword this to avoid the double use of "disadvantage"? "...tactical disadvantages against small starfighters as disadvantages" JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 23:10, 9 August 2022 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 00:50, 10 August 2022 (UTC)
    • My mistake on the gender, I thought it had been stated. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 01:06, 10 August 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 20:50, 10 August 2022 (UTC)