- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Comprehensive article nomination that was withdrawn. Please do not modify it.
Ealy's rooftop tavern deck
- Nominated by: - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 23:27, 11 November 2023 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Where everybodyyyyyy knows your naaaaaaaame
- Date Archived: 21:31, 1 December 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 273 words (61 introduction, 170 body, 42 behind the scenes)
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Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 12:52, 22 November 2023 (UTC)- Panther436 (talk) 05:07, 28 November 2023 (UTC)
- Provided Lew's last two get addressed —spookywillowwtalk 04:56, 1 December 2023 (UTC)
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Lew
Please create the redlinkLewisr (talk) 23:29, 11 November 2023 (UTC)Star Wars: The High Republic Character Encyclopedia dates the events of Convergence to 382 BBY so you can amend and shorten the note. Would be nice if you'd update your other SAs from the story with this alsoLewisr (talk) 23:36, 11 November 2023 (UTC)The Caloria Run needs contextualizing, as does the Gorag Tower (as a penthouse or similar)Lewisr (talk) 00:52, 27 November 2023 (UTC)Since it was referred to as just Ealy's at one point, it should note that it was also simply known as thatLewisr (talk) 00:08, 1 December 2023 (UTC)- The last sentence can be split, looking maybe at 'but they were' Lewisr (talk) 04:54, 1 December 2023 (UTC)
- The quote about Axel saying they should have gone to Ealy's should be prosified as it's an IU mention of the establishment still (side note is this will almost certainly take it over the count) Lewisr (talk) 04:54, 1 December 2023 (UTC)
Panther
The date/date ref seems to need a fix, should probably be something like what's on the "The Queen's Bloom" articleThere are a lot of details from the story missing, namely that it was housed in a five-story building, it had a fountain with giddy tonic, it was the first place Axel had discovered wandering the city, and he listened to pilots and traders tell stories there.Panther436 (talk) 04:03, 19 November 2023 (UTC)- Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 10:10, 22 November 2023 (UTC)
- Wonderful job with that. Just one more thing: It's worth briefly noting that Axel & Co did actually go to the tavern and after Kozmo didn't like it were convinced by Romero. Panther436 (talk) 02:37, 26 November 2023 (UTC)
- The text never states they entered the tavern, only that Kozmo was snide against going there. They could have seen a sign outside or Kozmo could have already been familiar with the location. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 16:34, 27 November 2023 (UTC)
- Regardless of them not going in, from the article's text "almost went to Ealy's" you would never know that they did travel to Ealy's and were at its building before deciding not to go in. And I think Kozmo's reaction to the tavern as a whole when they arrived can and should still be included even though we don't know exactly what made him react that way. Panther436 (talk) 02:49, 28 November 2023 (UTC)
- The text never states they entered the tavern, only that Kozmo was snide against going there. They could have seen a sign outside or Kozmo could have already been familiar with the location. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 16:34, 27 November 2023 (UTC)
- Wonderful job with that. Just one more thing: It's worth briefly noting that Axel & Co did actually go to the tavern and after Kozmo didn't like it were convinced by Romero. Panther436 (talk) 02:37, 26 November 2023 (UTC)
- Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 10:10, 22 November 2023 (UTC)