- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
Deviss
- Nominated by: ~~~~CommanderDeviss327(talk)
- Nomination comments: As evidenced by my username, this is very important to me. I wanted to nominate it a long time ago, but I wanted to get more experience before this.
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Fan26
The Absolutely Everything You Need to Know book does not require a full date, just the year of publication.Grand Army of the Republic and skin color are currently infobox-exclusive."He earned the designation "CT-65/91-6210" in Guide to the Grand Army of the Republic, a reference article published in Star Wars Insider 84, however, is considered non-canon." There's clear grammatical error here, please fix this.Almost none of the info in the second paragraph of the BtS is actually stated in the Hasbro page that paragraph is currently cited to.Fan26 (Talk) 13:38, April 15, 2020 (UTC)- I believe everything has been fixed --CommanderDeviss327(talk)15:04, April 15, 2020
- "a reference article published in Star Wars Insider 84, now considered non-canon" Still very awkward. Also, the insider article is now part of Legends, not "non-canon".
- You've hardly fixed anything in that second BtS paragraph. You've cited the bit about him being based on an "unused character design" to Bly's old datbank entry, which only says Bly used to have red markings. Furthermore, the rest of the paragraph is still cited to that hasbro page that provides info different from what's in the article.
- Again, the Hasbro page provides information different to what you've put in this article. Please fix this. Fan26 (Talk) 14:34, April 16, 2020 (UTC)
- Now I believe it has been CommanderDeviss327(talk)1:42, April 16, 2020 (UTC)
- Again, the Hasbro page provides information different to what you've put in this article. Please fix this. Fan26 (Talk) 14:34, April 16, 2020 (UTC)
- I believe everything has been fixed --CommanderDeviss327(talk)15:04, April 15, 2020
Color is linked to twice in the infobox.2015 needs to be linked to.The Revenge of the Sith visual guide also does not require full publication date.Fan26 (Talk) 17:22, April 15, 2020 (UTC)- I fixed the BTS to match with the refs. fixed color, linked 2015, and reformed sentence.--CommanderDeviss327(talk)17:01, April 17, 2020 (UTC)
UberSoldat
- Per precedent (Crag, TX-828), you cannot use the Databank entry alone to source his physical traits, you should make it specific to Deviss. UberSoldat93
(talk) 20:16, April 16, 2020 (UTC)
- I fixed the reference.--CommanderDeviss327(talk)17:01, April 17, 2020 (UTC)
- You also need to state that Deviss shares these traits as he is portrayed as a clone. UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:26, April 18, 2020 (UTC)
- You also need to state that Deviss shares these traits as he is portrayed as a clone. UberSoldat93
- I fixed the reference.--CommanderDeviss327(talk)17:01, April 17, 2020 (UTC)
Spooky
Please work the currently infobox-exclusive information (species & gender) into the body text.In the BtS: "He was confirmed to be canon..." I believe that would be much better off worded differently. The BtS should explain his origins in the Legends continuity, then say he was brought into the new canon continuity, rather than "confirmed to be...", which is generally not used. Given this is the canon version of the page, such canon first mentions/picturing could be listed first, and then afterwards, the Legends origin information; general precedent.BtS: Please include the author of the RotS visual dictionary.I also think specifying Journey to Star Wars: The Force Awakens as the publishing program of Absolutely Everything You Need to Know is unnecessary.—spookywillowwtalk 17:09, April 17, 2020 (UTC)- I think everything is good now.--CommanderDeviss327(talk)1:33, April 18, 2020 (UTC)
Anil
- Please use {{InsiderCite}} for citations from the Insider magazine.
- Does the source explicitly say Deviss was a member of the Grand Army? He could be serving in the navy, special forces, etc.
- The image present in Absolutely Everything You Need to Know is only a portion of the current infobox image, which, by the way, is from a Legends source and cannot be used in a Canon article. Furthermore, many of the equipment you list here are not visible there.
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 19:30, April 18, 2020 (UTC)
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Vote to remove nomination (EC only)
Unaddressed objection by Shayanomer, over seven days old. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 13:16, April 25, 2020 (UTC)- Tommy Macaroni 13:17, April 25, 2020 (UTC)
- Imperators II(Talk) 13:20, April 25, 2020 (UTC)
