Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Dental mop

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Dental mop

• Nominated by: Jade Moonstroller (talk) 03:58, 30 May 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Supreme Emperor requested this for whatever reason, so that better be a vote here.
• WookieeProject (optional):

(0 ECs/1 Users/1 Total)

(Votes required: 2 EC vote(s) required to reach minimum. Additional 2 user or 1 EC vote required to pass.)

Support

1. Copy-edit. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 10:02, 13 June 2022 (UTC)

Object

Braha

• Context for Smapp?
  • It's a creature. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 16:35, 9 June 2022 (UTC)
• "The recipe called for six quarts […]" recipe of what?
  • Why for the Smapp, of course! /jk Jade Moonstroller (talk) 16:35, 9 June 2022 (UTC)
• "The dental mop was used to spread this mixture over the creature's body […]" the implies to me that I should have already known about the creature before that sentence. That should be revised. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 03:14, 6 June 2022 (UTC)
  • It's the Smapp! Jade Moonstroller (talk) 16:35, 9 June 2022 (UTC)

Manoof

• Should "Cooking a Smapp" have its own article? It sounds like it is an IU recipe? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 07:39, 13 June 2022 (UTC)
  • This particular recipe might constitute an article. I'll look into it. Jade Moonstroller (talk) 01:42, 22 June 2022 (UTC)
    • Extended due to COVID <3 Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 01:01, 6 July 2022 (UTC)
• Can Diet/Legends and Foodstuff/Legends be linked somewhere? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 07:39, 13 June 2022 (UTC)
  • Do you think linking them where it says 'cooking' would be necessary? Jade Moonstroller (talk) 01:42, 22 June 2022 (UTC)
    • No, since cooking is an activity separate to food and eating. I had a look and we could maybe pop something like "to prepare the food for consumption" or "prior to the food being eaten" where its mentions popping it in the oven Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 02:45, 23 June 2022 (UTC)
      • Extended due to COVID <3 Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 01:01, 6 July 2022 (UTC)

Macaroni

• It looks like you can add {{Device}} with "spreading" as a purpose. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 00:34, 18 June 2022 (UTC)
  • Oh, good idea! Jade Moonstroller (talk) 01:42, 22 June 2022 (UTC)
    • Extended due to COVID <3 Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 01:01, 6 July 2022 (UTC)

SE

• There is an image of the smapp on the smapp article, can this somehow be incorporated? Supreme Emperor ^Holocomm 05:25, 30 June 2022 (UTC)
  • Extended due to COVID <3 Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 01:01, 6 July 2022 (UTC)

Samonic

• "The recipe" should be "A recipe," or is it named? It could use its own article too.
• Purpose should be in the beginning of the article. Samonic 13:57, 11 July 2022 (UTC)
  • (Extended due to Covid.) Samonic 13:57, 11 July 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (EC only)

1. Outstanding objection/s over a week. RL takes precedence so just focus on family and renominate when you're ready :) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 03:38, 14 July 2022 (UTC)
2. OOM 224 10:10, 14 July 2022 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:21, 14 July 2022 (UTC)