Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Delmaasi pirates

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Delmaasi pirates

• Nominated by: Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 05:17, 18 April 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: These pirate groups are interesting :P

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Support

1. Not a huge fan of that navbox… JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 22:46, 20 April 2021 (UTC)
2. That navbox is a crime. Fan26 (Talk) 15:02, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
3. Reorganised the navbox a bit :P OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 16:08, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
4. UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:45, 28 April 2021 (UTC)

Object

OOM

• "Like many others, Count Dooku, the leader of the Confederacy, deprioritized the Delmaasi pirates' capture" I'm confused here. What is "Like many others" referring to? And what did the pirates capture? OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 16:22, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
  • The first part was referring to other pirate groups, and the second was supposed to read like "Dooku deprioritized capturing the pirates", but I reworded it regardless to prevent confusion. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 16:36, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
    • Ah, I see now. Made a copy-edit.
• Last thing: could use a {{Youmay}} to Delmaas system OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 07:25, 24 April 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 11:45, 28 April 2021 (UTC)