Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Dannis Veriga

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Dannis Veriga

• Nominated by: Cade Calrayn 21:19, 15 October 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:TOR

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:45, 20 October 2021 (UTC)
2. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:25, 20 October 2021 (UTC)
3. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 17:03, 4 November 2021 (UTC)
4. Liverpool92 02:58, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
5. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:27, 30 November 2021 (UTC)

Object

Luca

• The last sentence of the first paragraph is unreferenced. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 06:25, 17 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Cade Calrayn 16:39, 20 October 2021 (UTC)

Fannis Veriga

• Defense of Alderaan should be linked to. Fan26 (Talk) 00:01, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
• Alderaan should be ID'd as being in the Core Worlds Fan26 (Talk) 00:03, 31 October 2021 (UTC)
  • Both done. Cade Calrayn 20:55, 1 November 2021 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• I'm seeing some details from that quote that can be documented in the body. Does the Codex entry also specify who Veriga is talking to? UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:09, 2 November 2021 (UTC)
  • What specifically are you referring to? I'm not sure what details you mean. Also, no, it's simply a quote from his court-martial, nothing more. Cade Calrayn 20:59, 9 November 2021 (UTC)
    • Then that should be included in the attribution. As for the actual body, there's the character's point of view on the matter. "Why die trying?" especially feels like a crucial personality detail. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:47, 10 November 2021 (UTC)
      • Done. Cade Calrayn 19:27, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
        • Can also point out what they said during that court-martial. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:31, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
          • Like I said in Discord, I disagree. The details from the Codex are all present, and there's no need to go into details about what they specifically said during the court-martial, as that's never been a requirement for documenting dialogue from novels or other sources. Having the quote convey the character's opinion and attribute it to their court-martial is enough. Cade Calrayn 02:25, 18 November 2021 (UTC)
            • After speaking with fellow ECs, two of them agree (OOM included) that the quote can be summarized in prose. As OOM pointed out below, banking on the reader to figure it out themselves is a bad practice. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:05, 20 November 2021 (UTC)
              • Done, and added an intro as the word count went up. Cade Calrayn 18:53, 27 November 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• For the quote, yes, there's no need to document every dialogue detail, but a bit of repetition would be beneficial here. Readers can't be expected to piece together quote-exclusive info, so the prose should at least mention the fact that they spoke at the tribunal and summarise that they admitted and took responsibility. OOM 224 15:44, 19 November 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 08:27, 30 November 2021 (UTC)