Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Dankko Verrimuch

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Dankko Verrimuch

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"Dankko, Dankko Verrimuch" - Elvis, probably JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 19:53, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
- Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:13, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
Samonic ^(Talk) 15:04, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
—spookywilloww^talk 20:41, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
Imperators II^(Talk) 12:37, 30 January 2023 (UTC)

~~Do we know who considered Dankko "experienced" and "professional"?~~
- We do, I've restructured that bit. RogueWhistler (talk) 22:46, 23 January 2023 (UTC)
~~Does Verrimuch's podracer appear in the comic?~~
- No, or rather, none of the podracers in the comic is identified as his. RogueWhistler (talk) 22:46, 23 January 2023 (UTC)
~~"blue-lensed goggles joined by green material" Maybe you could call the green material a connector?~~
- How does it look now? RogueWhistler (talk) 22:46, 23 January 2023 (UTC)
~~I'd recommend moving the starting point and thank you very much bits to the first paragraph so that the first paragraph is a mini "History" section and the other a "Personality and traits."~~
- Done. RogueWhistler (talk) 22:46, 23 January 2023 (UTC)
~~Missing Category:Individuals of unspecified gender and Category:Individuals with unspecified pronouns.~~ Samonic ^(Talk) 11:37, 23 January 2023 (UTC)
- Done. RogueWhistler (talk) 22:46, 23 January 2023 (UTC)
~~Since Fodesinbeed Annodue are two persons, I assume that Beed replied to a comment Fode made? If my assumption is correct, I'd recommend adding Fode's comment to the article's quote.~~ Samonic ^(Talk) 14:19, 24 January 2023 (UTC)
- Done. It's a sentence fragment, but that's as-written. RogueWhistler (talk) 22:59, 24 January 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 12:37, 30 January 2023 (UTC)