Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Corsair Wars

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Corsair Wars

  • Nominated by: -The Grand Chewbacca (Talk) 16:10, February 1, 2020 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Aphra's got a lot of fun lore stuff, so I'll start here.

(4 ECs/1 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote Zed42 (talk) 07:23, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:06, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
  3. ECvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:19, February 3, 2020 (UTC)
  4. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:18, February 4, 2020 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 12:34, February 4, 2020 (UTC)

Object

Ben
  • The rise of the Empire needs a date after it to give a better perspective on the time range. You could also explain why its before the rise of the Empire with a date note mentioning that the Jedi Order had fallen during the rise or something.
  • It only says Oo'ob broke doctrine. It is unknown whether Var-Whill was braking any doctrine as well.
  • It could be pointed out that Var-Whill was recruited.
  • Oo'ob and Var-Whill's fates aren't necessary for an article about a war.
  • The second paragraph could be orientated to say that "the Corsair Wars were mentioned in Korin Aphra's notes" or something and then say that the extract mentioning the war was read out at so and so.
  • Don't need to say it's canon in the BTS section. I make this mistake all the time. Braha'tok enthusiast (talk) 21:14, February 1, 2020 (UTC)
Zed
  • I've objected to this 1 ABY date note before. An exact year probably isn't that necessary, especially since this date note is extremely convoluted. I think it would be better to just state "sometime before the Battle of Hoth in 3 ABY," using Empire Ascendant 1 as a reference point. Zed42 (talk) 11:51, February 2, 2020 (UTC)
  • An article should be created for Aphra's "Notes on Jedi Heresies." Zed42 (talk) 12:00, February 2, 2020 (UTC)
  • The 19 BBY date note doesn't really need to mention the Galactic Empire, since Galactic Atlas can also be used to date the beginning of the Jedi Purge to that year. Zed42 (talk) 21:11, February 2, 2020 (UTC)
Imp
  • I feel like the part about the plot to assassinate Palpatine is irrelevant to the article's subject and too distracting. Please cut it. Imperators II(Talk) 16:07, February 3, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 12:34, February 4, 2020 (UTC)