Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Coalition for Improvements

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Coalition for Improvements

• Nominated by: --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 23:21, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 17:27, 7 July 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 147 words (0 introduction, 87 body, 60 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:AMB, WP:FFGAMES

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

1. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:52, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
2. Lewisr (talk) 14:50, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
3. —spookywilloww^talk 03:06, 4 July 2023 (UTC)
4. Fan26 (Talk) 00:54, 7 July 2023 (UTC)

Object

Uber

• Please check if that HoloNet issue in the Legends article is either a mention or an appearance and update the BTS as necessary. UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:17, 1 July 2023 (UTC)
  • It's a mention --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 19:20, 1 July 2023 (UTC)

Fan

• " realign wayward star systems back to the principles of the New Order. " this sounds less like an encyclopedic neutral description of what the organization does and more like an Imperial-biased mission statement Fan26 (Talk) 20:35, 1 July 2023 (UTC)
  • Not sure how to else reword it, that comes directly from the source. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 16:39, 2 July 2023 (UTC)
    • Perhaps you could specify it was the Empire that saw them as "wayward"? UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:52, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
      • Reworded. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 13:22, 3 July 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 00:54, 7 July 2023 (UTC)