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Chrenthoan Abyss
- Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 00:05, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
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Imperators II(Talk) 22:57, 2 April 2022 (UTC)- OOM 224 06:48, 3 April 2022 (UTC)
- —spookywillowwtalk 06:59, 3 April 2022 (UTC)
- JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 16:55, 4 April 2022 (UTC)
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Spooky
I was wondering if you might make a slight adjustment: in the third sentence, it reads as if the Abyss has the Anoat and Faltheen sectors within it, rather than listing them all as separate areas controlled. A little fiddling might help it a bit, perhaps swapping "including" for something.—spookywillowwtalk 02:43, 25 March 2022 (UTC)- This look better? Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 15:58, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
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Does Jakku occur after the appearance of the Chrenthoan Abyss? If yes, that should be made more clear in the dating ref. If not, the ref fails to explain why eleven months after Endor cannot be, for example, 6 ABY instead.Imperators II(Talk) 08:51, 25 March 2022 (UTC)- Nope, this scene is in fact 11 months after Endor at the start of the novel. The gist is that the Imperial loyalist forces are mostly at Jakku at this point while those that chose to go rogue are at the Chrenthoan Abyss, Anoat sector and so on. The only parts of the novel that are post Jakku is the much smaller 4th part of the book, which I would count as sort of a series of epilogue sections as they each have time jumps ranging up to several years in between them. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 15:57, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
- So from your answer I'm getting that Jakku occurred after the appearance of the Chrenthoan Abyss, in which case I'd like you to make that more clear in the ref note so that the possibility that the appearance of the Abyss is in 6 ABY is eliminated. Imperators II(Talk) 20:18, 27 March 2022 (UTC)
- Ah yeah I read your message wrong again, apologies. I have made changes. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 11:29, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
- So from your answer I'm getting that Jakku occurred after the appearance of the Chrenthoan Abyss, in which case I'd like you to make that more clear in the ref note so that the possibility that the appearance of the Abyss is in 6 ABY is eliminated. Imperators II(Talk) 20:18, 27 March 2022 (UTC)
- Nope, this scene is in fact 11 months after Endor at the start of the novel. The gist is that the Imperial loyalist forces are mostly at Jakku at this point while those that chose to go rogue are at the Chrenthoan Abyss, Anoat sector and so on. The only parts of the novel that are post Jakku is the much smaller 4th part of the book, which I would count as sort of a series of epilogue sections as they each have time jumps ranging up to several years in between them. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 15:57, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
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Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 16:55, 4 April 2022 (UTC)