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Chiss Academy
- Nominated by: Commander Code-8 Hello There! 09:50, 16 March 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: I thought this would have way more appearances
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Support
OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 14:44, 19 March 2021 (UTC)- Nice. Imperators II(Talk) 11:07, 2 April 2021 (UTC)
- JediMasterMacaroni
(Talk) 22:36, 2 April 2021 (UTC) 
UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:44, 4 April 2021 (UTC)
Object
OOM
- (Reviewing note) There's a paramter in the {{Top}} template that removes the table of contents.
- Thanks for that.
The NEC ref doesn't fully cover the sentence it cites. For example, the ref does not say that Sev'rance Tann was a Chiss. Also, each ref note should be fully linked like the article body.OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 17:07, 16 March 2021 (UTC)- I've moved the ref and trimmed it so it only refers to the year of the battle, but that might have gone too far. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 01:36, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
- That's actually fine. I've trimmed it down even further since that ref note now only needs to cite the Battle of Geonosis taking place in 22 BBY.
- I've moved the ref and trimmed it so it only refers to the year of the battle, but that might have gone too far. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 01:36, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
Per WP:MOS, "do not link individual words within proper compound nouns" This applies to Chiss Space.- I've left the link to space in because the MOS says it can be linked if it's the only use of the term in the article, but I've moved the Chiss link later.
Are these troopers who served under Tann a part of the Chiss Ascendancy? Whatever the case, the article should clarify their affiliation.- Clone Campaigns only says "A story is told amongst her troops" nothing on which soldiers they were.
The article should mention the Clone Wars in two places—the part about the Battle of Geonosis and the part about the CIS—for context.OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 08:28, 17 March 2021 (UTC)- Done, though that pushed it over the 165 word limit so I've had to add sections. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 04:47, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
Could use a little more context for Tann in the intro, like how she became a CIS general.OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 07:09, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 09:45, 4 April 2021 (UTC)