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Ched Varga
- Nominated by: Green Tentacle (Talk) 11:33, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Originally intended as a CAN but got too long under the old rules so ended up as a GA. Back here now the rules have changed.
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OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 11:56, 24 April 2021 (UTC)- 01miki10 Open comlink 14:50, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
- I'm obligated to mention that, in Doctor Who lore, the term "Varga" also exists, but it is part of the name of a plant species controlled by the Daleks--Editoronthewiki (talk) 02:57, 25 April 2021 (UTC)
- WELCOME BACK TO THE CAN, GT! JediMasterMacaroni
(Talk) 03:32, 25 April 2021 (UTC) - UberSoldat93
(talk) 07:23, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
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UberSoldat
There has been a growing precedent for combining the place and date of death into a single note for the infobox.- They're different bits of information. The date requires a lot of explanation, the place is directly from a source. Combining them would be clunky and of no benefit to readers. Green Tentacle (Talk) 13:09, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
- You can say something like: "Since Varga has already died when Azzameen takes part in the proving grounds, his death on the Salvage Yard as depicted in Alliance must have taken place before this date." UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:45, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
- I still don't see how that's an improvement, but fine. Done. Green Tentacle (Talk) 14:24, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
- You can say something like: "Since Varga has already died when Azzameen takes part in the proving grounds, his death on the Salvage Yard as depicted in Alliance must have taken place before this date." UberSoldat93
- They're different bits of information. The date requires a lot of explanation, the place is directly from a source. Combining them would be clunky and of no benefit to readers. Green Tentacle (Talk) 13:09, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
I feel that the last sentence of the BTS is unnecessary as it does not add anything of value to the article and only repeats what is already presented in Appearances/Sources.UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:47, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
- It's important because his name doesn't appear in the game but does in the strategy guide. I've reworked it to make that clearer. Green Tentacle (Talk) 13:09, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
- Then that's a {{1stID}} missing from Sources. UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:42, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
- Good point. Added. Green Tentacle (Talk) 14:24, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
- Then that's a {{1stID}} missing from Sources. UberSoldat93
- It's important because his name doesn't appear in the game but does in the strategy guide. I've reworked it to make that clearer. Green Tentacle (Talk) 13:09, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
"Salvage Yard" is capitalized in the infobox but not in the body, which one is correct?UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:45, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
- Both. The Salvage Yard is a salvage yard. The body refer to it by a description, not by name. Green Tentacle (Talk) 14:24, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
01miki10
Article body is only 150 words, therefore article shouldn't have introduction and sectioning.01miki10 Open comlink 13:50, 24 April 2021 (UTC)- Done. Green Tentacle (Talk) 14:17, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 18:16, 1 May 2021 (UTC)