- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
Centennial Peregrine
- Nominated by: ProfessorTofty (talk) 00:19, July 17, 2019 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: A pretty straightforward one. Starship mentioned only in passing by Hondo Ohnaka in Pirate's Price. ProfessorTofty (talk) 00:19, July 17, 2019 (UTC)
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Zed
From my understanding, Hondo gave the name to the ship he crashed at the start of the book. If that is the case, it would be an appearance, and not just a mention.Zed42 (talk) 03:48, July 17, 2019 (UTC)- I guess you're right about that. Didn't really occur to me upon first read, but yeah, I'd say that is the case. Alright, I'll take care of that tomorrow, as well as the other objections below. Might have to play it by ear on this one, see whether or not the updates push it past the word count for a comprehensive article. ProfessorTofty (talk) 03:06, July 21, 2019 (UTC)
- Upgraded from a mention to an actual appearance and also added details to the article to reflect that. ProfessorTofty (talk) 03:17, July 23, 2019 (UTC)
- I guess you're right about that. Didn't really occur to me upon first read, but yeah, I'd say that is the case. Alright, I'll take care of that tomorrow, as well as the other objections below. Might have to play it by ear on this one, see whether or not the updates push it past the word count for a comprehensive article. ProfessorTofty (talk) 03:06, July 21, 2019 (UTC)
- Additionally, the Falcon is later chased by Imperials because of an incident involving Hondo at Imperial Garrison Bardelberan 7. Given the mention of the Imperial garrison commander, I think the two mentions can be connected. Zed42 (talk) 21:45, July 26, 2019 (UTC)
Anil
The paragraph seems repetitive at some points. Especially here: "He went on to state that he had both stolen and crashed it in the same day." Could you please try to reword it?- The various edits I've now made to the article have taken care of that. ProfessorTofty (talk) 03:14, July 23, 2019 (UTC)
Could you give some context about Hondo and Han please?- That should be better now. ProfessorTofty (talk) 03:14, July 23, 2019 (UTC)
- I'd like to see some more small details, like Han being a smuggler and Hondo being a pirate, added to the article.
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 06:58, July 23, 2019 (UTC)
- Small details added. ProfessorTofty (talk) 17:45, July 25, 2019 (UTC)
- I'd like to see some more small details, like Han being a smuggler and Hondo being a pirate, added to the article.
- That should be better now. ProfessorTofty (talk) 03:14, July 23, 2019 (UTC)
- I'd like to see a time frame for the event.
- We don't seem to have a specific time for this novel. I added that it was during the Imperial Era. Will that be good, or would you prefer something more specific? The page for the novel states that the events took place after Solo: A Star Wars Story, though it isn't cited. ProfessorTofty (talk) 17:45, July 25, 2019 (UTC)
- If the books makes it clear that it's set between Solo and A New Hope, you could say that it took place sometime between 10 BBY and 19 BBY, with a manual reference note, of course. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:57, July 25, 2019 (UTC)
- If the books makes it clear that it's set between Solo and A New Hope, you could say that it took place sometime between 10 BBY and 19 BBY, with a manual reference note, of course.
- We don't seem to have a specific time for this novel. I added that it was during the Imperial Era. Will that be good, or would you prefer something more specific? The page for the novel states that the events took place after Solo: A Star Wars Story, though it isn't cited. ProfessorTofty (talk) 17:45, July 25, 2019 (UTC)
If the novel has no illustrations of the ship, I don't think the name of the book's illustrator is relevant to this article.- Removed the illustrator. ProfessorTofty (talk) 16:20, July 22, 2019 (UTC)
The last sentence of the BTS looks totally unnecessary to me.- Deleted. ProfessorTofty (talk) 16:20, July 22, 2019 (UTC)
Does the ship also appear in the audiobook version? If it does, it should be added to the Appearances, along with creating a proper article for it to avoid any redlinks, of course. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:59, July 19, 2019 (UTC)
- I've searched the audiobook for you and added an audio file for the quote. But you still should take care of that redlink.
Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 01:29, July 20, 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks. Audiobook page created. ProfessorTofty (talk) 16:20, July 22, 2019 (UTC)
- I've searched the audiobook for you and added an audio file for the quote. But you still should take care of that redlink.
Comments
- By my count, the article is currently above the 200 word limit required for sectioning and slightly above the 250 word maximum for comprehensive articles. Unless the article is cut down somewhat, one or both of those may need to be done. Zed42 (talk) 21:45, July 26, 2019 (UTC)
Vote to remove nomination (EC only)
- Unaddressed objection over one week old. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:57, August 2, 2019 (UTC)
- Zed42 is right - the article has gotten too long to be a comprehensive article. Just go ahead and close this, and sooner or later I'll go ahead and re-open as a good article nomination. ProfessorTofty (talk) 01:56, August 2, 2019 (UTC)
- We will do so shortly. Thanks. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 15:24, August 2, 2019 (UTC)
- We will do so shortly. Thanks.
- Zed42 is right - the article has gotten too long to be a comprehensive article. Just go ahead and close this, and sooner or later I'll go ahead and re-open as a good article nomination. ProfessorTofty (talk) 01:56, August 2, 2019 (UTC)
- Tommy Macaroni 07:31, August 2, 2019 (UTC)
