Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Caz Ocean

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Caz Ocean

  • Nominated by: - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:25, 29 December 2022 (UTC)
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(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. Fan26 (Talk) 21:48, 29 December 2022 (UTC)
  2. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 21:55, 31 December 2022 (UTC)
  3. ECvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 05:54, 3 January 2023 (UTC)
  4. BloodOfIrizi Sabine Starbird (talk) 23:51, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
  5. ECvote Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 15:52, 8 January 2023 (UTC)

Object

  • Had a look and there's some missing info: Lazarians enjoy fishing from the ocean and ate marine creatures caught; the water has minerals that block sensor scans, hiding the Akwin; cities/governments that bordered the ocean. I haven't gone through much of the Twin Suns in detail, that was just from a quick glance but it would be worth going through it and seeing what else is there... Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 06:47, 3 January 2023 (UTC)
    • Added. The bit about cities/governments bordering the ocean isn't mentioned in any sources. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 22:52, 4 January 2023 (UTC)
      • Added a bit more per Discord. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:34, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
  • I think there's only one more, the fact that the Akwin had underwater cities in the ocean, each its own city state ruled by a king/queen. Manoof (he/him/his) RainbowRebellion2 10:47, 3 January 2023 (UTC)
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 22:52, 4 January 2023 (UTC)
Ziara
  • similar to articles about star systems, you dont need to say "caz ocean was an ocean". something like "caz ocean was located on.." is better
    • Fixed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:27, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
  • missing link to city (sofixit but currently cant fix it, sorry) BloodOfIrizi Sabine Starbird (talk) 21:17, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
    • Added. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 21:27, 7 January 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 15:52, 8 January 2023 (UTC)