Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Caraxl

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Caraxl

  • Nominated by: DarthRuiz30 (talk) 19:53, July 9, 2018 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Here we go

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

Support

  1. ECvote Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 12:16, July 11, 2018 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 16:03, July 12, 2018 (UTC)
  3. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 12:56, July 31, 2018 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:34, August 1, 2018 (UTC)

Object

Tommy
  • "Three days after the Resistance's mission to Mamkoda, Resistance bombers tried to deliver supplies to Caraxl, but after Tallissan Lintra reported that First Order TIE fighters were on an intercept course to their position, they had to abort the mission due to an order given by General Organa of avoiding any confrontation with the First Order that could cause problems in the New Republic Senate.[1]" This runs on a bit, could you split it?
  • "Around the 34 ABY,[4]" What do you mean here? Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 20:26, July 9, 2018 (UTC)
    • Forgot to remove "the", means around 34 ABY--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 20:40, July 9, 2018 (UTC)
  • "To stop both the pirates and First Order's plans." "Pirates" needs an apostrophe, and what were those plans? Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 21:05, July 9, 2018 (UTC)
  • Please remove duplicate referencing.
  • Context on Tallie?
    • Added Resistance pilot, How is that?--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 21:22, July 10, 2018 (UTC)
  • "First Order TIE fighters were on an intercept course to their position they had to abort the mission" Who is they? Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 12:47, July 10, 2018 (UTC)

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