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Caraxl
- Nominated by: DarthRuiz30 (talk) 19:53, July 9, 2018 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Here we go
(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)
Support
Tommy Macaroni 12:16, July 11, 2018 (UTC)
Imperators II(Talk) 16:03, July 12, 2018 (UTC)- Commander Code-8 Hello There! 12:56, July 31, 2018 (UTC)
Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:34, August 1, 2018 (UTC)
Object
Tommy
"Three days after the Resistance's mission to Mamkoda, Resistance bombers tried to deliver supplies to Caraxl, but after Tallissan Lintra reported that First Order TIE fighters were on an intercept course to their position, they had to abort the mission due to an order given by General Organa of avoiding any confrontation with the First Order that could cause problems in the New Republic Senate.[1]" This runs on a bit, could you split it?- Changed--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 20:40, July 9, 2018 (UTC)
"Around the 34 ABY,[4]" What do you mean here?TommyMacaroni 20:26, July 9, 2018 (UTC)
- Forgot to remove "the", means around 34 ABY--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 20:40, July 9, 2018 (UTC)
"To stop both the pirates and First Order's plans." "Pirates" needs an apostrophe, and what were those plans?TommyMacaroni 21:05, July 9, 2018 (UTC)
- Added--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 23:11, July 9, 2018 (UTC)
Please remove duplicate referencing.- Removed--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 21:22, July 10, 2018 (UTC)
Context on Tallie?- Added Resistance pilot, How is that?--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 21:22, July 10, 2018 (UTC)
"First Order TIE fighters were on an intercept course to their position they had to abort the mission" Who is they?TommyMacaroni 12:47, July 10, 2018 (UTC)
- Added--DarthRuiz30 (talk) 21:22, July 10, 2018 (UTC)