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Cabur-class starfighter
- Nominated by: RogueWhistler (talk) 04:36, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
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- Nicely done BloodOfIrizi
(talk) 04:04, 18 December 2022 (UTC) - - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 09:22, 6 January 2023 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 
(talk) 14:12, 6 January 2023 (UTC)- HeadSpikesWalls (she/they)
(talk!) 18:49, 11 January 2023 (UTC) - JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 03:24, 12 January 2023 (UTC)
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Ziara
context for Mandalore (title)Manufactured following the death[1] of Mandalore's last Imperial advisor, the Suprema,[5] the Cabur-class was in production by the time of the invasion of the galaxy "manufactured" and "in production" is repetitive, please rewordBloodOfIrizi (talk) 01:30, 17 December 2022 (UTC)
- How does that look? RogueWhistler (talk) 02:26, 17 December 2022 (UTC)
- i changed it slightly, lmk if it works + if the refs are accurate BloodOfIrizi (talk) 16:09, 17 December 2022 (UTC)
- That source doesn't call Mandalore the "supreme" leader, and offhand I don't know of any that does. "Mandalorian leader" is a bit generic, but I think it might be the best choice. RogueWhistler (talk) 20:30, 17 December 2022 (UTC)
- that works. i got supreme leader from the Mandalore's page but cant find a ref for it. but yeah something along the lines of "Mandalorian leader, known as Mandalore" works BloodOfIrizi (talk) 22:25, 17 December 2022 (UTC)
- Done. RogueWhistler (talk) 22:39, 17 December 2022 (UTC)
- that works. i got supreme leader from the Mandalore's page but cant find a ref for it. but yeah something along the lines of "Mandalorian leader, known as Mandalore" works BloodOfIrizi
- That source doesn't call Mandalore the "supreme" leader, and offhand I don't know of any that does. "Mandalorian leader" is a bit generic, but I think it might be the best choice. RogueWhistler (talk) 20:30, 17 December 2022 (UTC)
- i changed it slightly, lmk if it works + if the refs are accurate BloodOfIrizi
- How does that look? RogueWhistler (talk) 02:26, 17 December 2022 (UTC)
additional context for Nagai (that they were a species) - i'd add it myself because its a sofixit but im not sure about the referencesBloodOfIrizi (talk) 01:18, 18 December 2022 (UTC)
- Done. RogueWhistler (talk) 02:05, 18 December 2022 (UTC)
Macaroni
Right off the bat I'm very skeptical that we can use Traviss's website as a valid source. Is there something else we can use?JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:24, 29 December 2022 (UTC)- I just used the source cited on Mando'a/Legends. Looking at that page, anything more official seems to be dead, but I've dropped a line over on Discord. RogueWhistler (talk) 18:43, 30 December 2022 (UTC)
- If indeed nothing is available I would just suggest removing it. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:54, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
- I was thinking it could be moved to the BtS, would that be appropriate? RogueWhistler (talk) 19:51, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
- Yeah that can work. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:01, 9 January 2023 (UTC)
- How does that look? RogueWhistler (talk) 23:05, 9 January 2023 (UTC)
- Yeah that can work. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:01, 9 January 2023 (UTC)
- I was thinking it could be moved to the BtS, would that be appropriate? RogueWhistler (talk) 19:51, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
- If indeed nothing is available I would just suggest removing it. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:54, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
- I just used the source cited on Mando'a/Legends. Looking at that page, anything more official seems to be dead, but I've dropped a line over on Discord. RogueWhistler (talk) 18:43, 30 December 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat
If Hyperspace does not identify which of the unidentified ships is a Cabur, I believe the infobox image needs to go.UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:06, 30 December 2022 (UTC)
- The article makes it clear the Mandalorians were flying Caburs, so I think the cockpit shot should be fine. It's just the exterior that's uncertain. RogueWhistler (talk) 18:43, 30 December 2022 (UTC)
- It's still speculation to assume that that specific cockpit shot is of a Cabur. You already have a BTS note justifying the lack of an image, so the removal will be acceptable. UberSoldat93 (talk) 08:21, 31 December 2022 (UTC)
- Done. RogueWhistler (talk) 19:58, 1 January 2023 (UTC)
- It's still speculation to assume that that specific cockpit shot is of a Cabur. You already have a BTS note justifying the lack of an image, so the removal will be acceptable. UberSoldat93
- The article makes it clear the Mandalorians were flying Caburs, so I think the cockpit shot should be fine. It's just the exterior that's uncertain. RogueWhistler (talk) 18:43, 30 December 2022 (UTC)
Does the source specifically mention the starship's role?UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:14, 2 January 2023 (UTC)
- Just that it's a starfighter/fighter. RogueWhistler (talk) 19:59, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
- If it doesn't specify the role then it's redundant to the article, as I've mentioned here before. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:19, 6 January 2023 (UTC)
- That makes sense to me, done. RogueWhistler (talk) 14:01, 6 January 2023 (UTC)
- If it doesn't specify the role then it's redundant to the article, as I've mentioned here before. UberSoldat93
- Just that it's a starfighter/fighter. RogueWhistler (talk) 19:59, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 03:24, 12 January 2023 (UTC)