Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Brooke Vitale

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The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Comprehensive article nomination that was withdrawn. Please do not modify it.

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  • 1 Brooke Vitale
    • 1.1 (0 ECs/0 Users/0 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 UberSoldat
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Brooke Vitale

  • Nominated by: Dentface (talk) 23:10, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Never expected to be making a CAN on this. But I guess it qualifies? Let's see what happens.

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Support

Object

UberSoldat
  • Please see this section and update the Bibliography accordingly. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 06:39, 23 July 2021 (UTC)
    • Done. Dentface (talk) 16:27, 23 July 2021 (UTC)
      • Anything else from SW.com? UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 16:44, 23 July 2021 (UTC)
        • Checked multiple times. Doesn't seem so. Dentface (talk) 18:27, 23 July 2021 (UTC)
  • If you look at pre-existing OOU person status articles (1, 2, 3), you can see that you can source the entire row to the same source as long as it supports the information within the individual cells. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 16:44, 23 July 2021 (UTC)
    • Adjusted accordingly. The only thing I didn't move all the way to the far end of the row for the titles that were all cited as "World of Reading" since that covers multiple books. Does this look good now? Dentface (talk) 18:27, 23 July 2021 (UTC)
      • That should be cited to something at least, there shouldn't be anything unsourced. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 18:36, 23 July 2021 (UTC)
        • Do I cite it multiple times - once per book listed? Or just one singular source? Dentface (talk) 18:53, 23 July 2021 (UTC)
          • Just one. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 18:57, 23 July 2021 (UTC)
            • Done. Dentface (talk) 22:06, 23 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Moving on to the Biography, you need to be more detailed about what works she wrote (see David Maxwell and Lawrence Holland). Since you nominated the article while there are still works to be released, you will also need to document them when they are out. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 07:38, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
    • I've expanded the biography, but now the article is far past the 250 word limit for comprehensive articles. As such, this nomination should be closed. If you have any additional comments or recommendations before that happens, please let me know. Dentface (talk) 02:24, 2 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments

  • Ideally, in the "Published works" table, I'd have a bulleted list using * if one of the titles was published in more than one collection. However, this breaks the table. It looks fine in preview, but once the page is published, the table's messed up. Dentface (talk) 23:10, 22 July 2021 (UTC)