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Blue Man's Group
- Nominated by: Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 02:57, 12 August 2022 (UTC)
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Support
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:48, 23 August 2022 (UTC)- Thrawn's group. Samonic
08:08, 23 August 2022 (UTC) - Fan26 (Talk) 17:30, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
Copy-edit, take note of Cite_web in particular. UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:01, 24 August 2022 (UTC)
Object
Kilji man's group
I feel like it being a biography written by Tik Tali should be specified in the first sentence. I began reading the article and thought that I was reading an article about Talosh.Samonic 08:06, 13 August 2022 (UTC)
- Heh, forgot about blue Chiss as well. I reordered the text. For reference, originally I wrote in the chronological IU order, which made the biography only written later. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 16:08, 13 August 2022 (UTC)
Could you reword the " In 4 ABY,[2] the battle of the Great Pit of Carkoon occurred, where Jabba was killed and the Max Rebo Band broke up after that event. " part? It reads a bit weird IMO. Something like "After the battle of Carkoon, which resulted in Jabba's death in 4 ABY, the Max Rebo Band broke up" would suffice.Samonic 18:24, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
- Done. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 18:50, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
Would you be against breaking up the paragraph?Samonic 19:18, 15 August 2022 (UTC)
- Paragraph broken. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 19:46, 15 August 2022 (UTC)
Braha
Tik Tali Talosh requires some context.Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 11:16, 16 August 2022 (UTC)- Resolved on the Discord server. Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 13:04, 16 August 2022 (UTC)
Comments
- At my discretion, I have felt like mentioning Talosh was President of the Derf Chapter of the Max Rebo Fan Club isn't necessary for this article. Also I'm aware of the similar name as the already-famous before the Insider article Blue Man Group, but didn't feel like it's obvious enough. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 03:03, 12 August 2022 (UTC)
- Disagree on the Blue Man Group, my first thought was that it was a RL article on the actual group, not an IU article. Plus it's nearly identical in name except for the possessive apostrophe. So yeah I think it should be mentioned in the BTS, even if it wasn't directly referenced by the author Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 06:17, 12 August 2022 (UTC)
- Done. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 13:19, 12 August 2022 (UTC)
- Disagree on the Blue Man Group, my first thought was that it was a RL article on the actual group, not an IU article. Plus it's nearly identical in name except for the possessive apostrophe. So yeah I think it should be mentioned in the BTS, even if it wasn't directly referenced by the author Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 06:17, 12 August 2022 (UTC)
- It was my further discretion that, in light of myself being uncertain on if Tik Tali Talosh is the "Stop That Jawa!" character, to remove his species, as I don't have any awareness of it being necessary to mention a character's species for articles about their publications as is. This is ultimately driven by my individual uncertainty about if he's the comic character because, if he is, the 3 legs would definitely make him seemingly a Humanoid alien species... Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 00:09, 15 August 2022 (UTC)
- Rich Handley confirmed he's the comic character. I'm definitely treating him as a non-Human now, given the 3 legs from the comic. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 04:39, 15 August 2022 (UTC)
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 13:01, 24 August 2022 (UTC)