Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Blorp

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Blorp

Nominated by: AmazinglyCool (talk) 23:38, 26 April 2023 (UTC)
Nomination comments:
Date Archived: 17:30, 31 May 2023 (UTC)
Final word count: 140 words (0 introduction, 91 body, 49 behind the scenes)
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Support

Lewisr (talk) 20:06, 13 May 2023 (UTC)
Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 18:43, 20 May 2023 (UTC)
Blorp Editoronthewiki (talk) 18:46, 20 May 2023 (UTC)
Ayrehead02 (talk) 17:53, 26 May 2023 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 17:22, 31 May 2023 (UTC)

Object

Ziara

~~no quote?~~

context for Haxion Brood

of the crew of the Stinger Mantis luxury yacht. - this part should be removed, it flows kinda strange. you can mentioned the Stinger Mantis in the next sentence

{{Youmay}}: the non-canon Blorp should be pipelinked from "creature", not "the"

~~Haxion Brood base should be pipelinked from "bases", not "one" - normally these two pipelink objections would be sofixit's, but wanted to let you know so its something to keep an eye out for~~ BloodOfIrizi ^(Syndicure) 23:59, 26 April 2023 (UTC)
- Addressed all. No quote however, as Merrin only thinks about the events. AmazinglyCool (talk) 10:38, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
i think {{BattleScarsDate}} will need a slight reworking, mainly this: "Jedi: Battle Scars is set "a few years" after the events of Star Wars Jedi: Fallen Order and "in the years before Star Wars Jedi: Survivor." what states that its "a few years" after JFO and "in the years after" JS? BloodOfIrizi ^(Syndicure) 19:07, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
~~also a direct link to the preview in the BTS would be beneficial imo~~ BloodOfIrizi ^(Syndicure) 19:08, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
- Addressed both. AmazinglyCool (talk) 19:54, 8 May 2023 (UTC)

spookly

~~Will be needing a {{1st}}~~—spookywilloww^talk 03:47, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
- The character never appears in the story, their fight with Kestis is only thought about by the characters. AmazinglyCool (talk) 10:38, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
  - In that case a {{1stm}}—there has to be at least one of 1st/1stm/1stp on every article.—spookywilloww^talk 14:29, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
    - There is in the external links section. AmazinglyCool (talk) 14:36, 1 May 2023 (UTC)
      - Ah my bad. I usually just skim the app/sources visually for it and must've missed.—spookywilloww^talk 14:39, 1 May 2023 (UTC)

Lew

~~This is somewhat related to Spooky's, and per precedent like Skeezump from the same book. The excerpt from Penguin shouldn't be listed as a 1stm Lewisr (talk) 14:55, 1 May 2023 (UTC)~~
- Fixed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 19:07, 6 May 2023 (UTC)
~~Blorp is stated to be a droid bounty hunter, so that will need updating on the page~~
~~Unless I missed something, there isn't reference to Cal fighting Blorp, he instead is mentioned as fighting a different hunter Lewisr (talk) 18:19, 9 May 2023 (UTC)~~
- Addressed both. AmazinglyCool (talk) 20:12, 9 May 2023 (UTC)
This should be it now. If I'm reading into it a bit too much then my apologies, but the fact it says 'it was difficult to fight the bigger fights when droid bounty hunters called Blorp kept trying to blow your head off at unexpected intervals.' it feels like they encountered Blorp at least more than once? Let me know what you think Lewisr (talk) 02:33, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
- I'm thinking perhaps, but would rather not assume. AmazinglyCool (talk) 16:15, 13 May 2023 (UTC)
  - Fair enough! Lewisr (talk) 20:06, 13 May 2023 (UTC)

Braha

~~Can Greez's relation to the crew get specified? Something like "Stinger Mantis's pilot" is fine.~~
- Addressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 16:15, 13 May 2023 (UTC)
~~Could a quote of Merrin using the name Blorp for this or do you think that's a stretch?~~ Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 11:19, 13 May 2023 (UTC)
- She never says the word "Blorp," but when we get a look into her thoughts she refers to the other hunters as Blorps. AmazinglyCool (talk) 16:15, 13 May 2023 (UTC)
  - Ok no worries. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 18:43, 20 May 2023 (UTC)

Macaroni

~~The naming policy doesn't seem to cover when non-canon subjects and canon have the same name, but I'd be in favor of setting a precedent to give the canon subject the non-parenthetical name.~~ JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:42, 18 May 2023 (UTC)
- Should the other page actually be at Gigantic Blorp anyway? Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:00, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
  - Just confirming whether I should move the current page at Blorp to "Gigantic Blorp" or something like "Blorp (creature)." AmazinglyCool (talk) 19:59, 23 May 2023 (UTC)
    - I'd suggest looking into the other Blorp to see if it should be at Gigantic Blorp, otherwise I do think it should be at Blorp (creature). JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 22:27, 28 May 2023 (UTC)
      - Moved. AmazinglyCool (talk) 02:09, 29 May 2023 (UTC)

Ayrehead

~~If Merrin only thinks of the other Haxxion Brood members as Blorps then she doesn't actually ever refer to them as such so the last sentence should be reworded to refelect this.~~ Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:00, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
- Addressed. AmazinglyCool (talk) 02:37, 20 May 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Had to do a minor update to the date, book can be confirmed to be between 12 BBY and 11 BBY Editoronthewiki (talk) 13:54, 3 May 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:22, 31 May 2023 (UTC)