Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Blazor

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Contents

  • 1 Blazor
    • 1.1 (2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 CC-8
        • 1.1.2.2 UberSoldat
        • 1.1.2.3 Cwedin
        • 1.1.2.4 Macaroni
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Blazor

  • Nominated by: Liverpool92Ackbar HS 23:42, 4 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: First Adventures nom.

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

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Support

  1. 420 blazor. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 12:14, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
  2. Cwedin(talk) 03:45, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
  3. ECvote OOM 224 ༼༽talk༼༽ 18:00, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
  4. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 17:50, 20 May 2021 (UTC)
  5. Nice work. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 03:54, 23 May 2021 (UTC)

Object

CC-8
  • Made some small changes in my copy-edit if you want to look them over.
  • Could use a bit more context for the organizations and droids mentioned, like what you did with IG-88. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 03:59, 5 May 2021 (UTC)
    • Added.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS 22:33, 5 May 2021 (UTC)
      • That's good, but I was specifically thinking of identifying CR-8R as a droid and Black Sun as a criminal organization. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 06:14, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
        • Added.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS
UberSoldat
  • Can you replace the Amazon citation with an IDW link? UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 07:00, 5 May 2021 (UTC)
    • Replaced.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS 22:02, 5 May 2021 (UTC)
      • Nevermind about this, turns out IDW doesn't show the full date. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 11:27, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
Cwedin
  • Can CR-8R telling the story be moved to the end of the paragraph? - Cwedin(talk) 15:25, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
    • Moved.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS 15:33, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
  • "During the Galactic Civil War" and "many decades later" should be removed. In the story, CR-8R only states that IG-88 was "infamous [in] the days of the Empire," and the story doesn't mention the war. "During the GCW" could be changed to "around the Imperial Era," or something like that. - Cwedin(talk) 23:53, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
    • Changed and "many decades later" removed.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS 00:35, 7 May 2021 (UTC)
Macaroni
  • Can a date for CR-8R's telling of the story be provided? JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 01:04, 7 May 2021 (UTC)
    • Because there isn't a confirmed date I did the best I could wording it.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS 11:40, 7 May 2021 (UTC)
      • Please pipelink the template the way I've done here. JediMasterMacaroniAdmiral Ackbar RH(Talk) 23:52, 9 May 2021 (UTC)
        • Fixed.--Liverpool92Ackbar HS 21:43, 10 May 2021 (UTC)

Comments

  • Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 07:12, 25 May 2021 (UTC)