- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Belyssa Romey
- Nominated by: Eyrezer 08:53, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Just to break up the barn-burner
(1 ECs/3 Users/4 Total)
Support
- —Axinal Convocation Chamber 14:04, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
- Imperators II(Talk) 15:29, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
- Coolio. NaruHina Talk
21:12, May 4, 2011 (UTC) 
~Savage
05:01, May 17, 2011 (UTC)
Object
- Axinal
I'm thinking it might be worthwhile to move the intro to a Biography section and give a short intro. If not, Rebel Alliance would need to be linked in the P&T.- No, the intro/bio is only 50 words long. An intro is unnecessary as there is insufficient information to need a summary and there is certainly precedent for not needing one. Similarly, in these articles a second link is not added in the P&T. --Eyrezer 09:47, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
- Just a suggestion, but this is fine with me.—Axinal Convocation Chamber 14:04, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
- No, the intro/bio is only 50 words long. An intro is unnecessary as there is insufficient information to need a summary and there is certainly precedent for not needing one. Similarly, in these articles a second link is not added in the P&T. --Eyrezer 09:47, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
Should there be an asterisk beside 132nd Forward Division rather than a blank space?- I think that looks ugly, but NaruHina has already added one anyway. --Eyrezer 09:47, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
- Otherwise, nice.—Axinal Convocation Chamber 16:05, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
"She achieved the rank of Major, at which time she was an officer in the 132nd Forward Division, which was stationed in the Atrivis sector,[1] located in the northwest region of the Outer Rim Territories." This is a run-on. NaruHina Talk
21:24, May 2, 2011 (UTC)- Simplified. --Eyrezer 09:47, May 4, 2011 (UTC)
Is there a name for her "generic Rebel" armor and uniform? Might be worth noting that she wore that in P&T. Also, perhaps mentioned that she had an illustration by Trevas? ~Savage 06:45, May 15, 2011 (UTC)- I couldn't find a name for the uniform, so I desribed it instead. As for Corroney, his name is no credited in the book, so I am not sure on what JMAS made his identification on the file page. --Eyrezer 07:02, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
- I see what you mean. Looks like Trevas, but there's nothing definite. No problemo. ~Savage 05:01, May 17, 2011 (UTC)
- I see what you mean. Looks like Trevas, but there's nothing definite. No problemo. ~Savage
- I couldn't find a name for the uniform, so I desribed it instead. As for Corroney, his name is no credited in the book, so I am not sure on what JMAS made his identification on the file page. --Eyrezer 07:02, May 16, 2011 (UTC)
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