Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Battle of Zaloriis

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Battle of Zaloriis

  • Nominated by: Commander Code-8 Hello There! 00:46, May 22, 2018 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: One day I'll have both versions of all these articles taken to status

(2 ECs/3 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 06:07, May 23, 2018 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:56, June 3, 2018 (UTC)
  3. ECvote Imperators II(Talk) 08:24, June 4, 2018 (UTC)
  4. grunny@wookieepedia:~$ 18:49, June 20, 2018 (UTC)
  5. Cwedin(talk) 18:47, June 21, 2018 (UTC)

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"Tommy"
  • I'd like to see a slight addition to the date ref, something like "The Empire Strikes Back: So You Want to Be a Jedi? places the Battle of Zaloriis before the Battle of Hoth, which Star Wars: Galactic Atlas dates to 3 ABY." Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 12:35, May 22, 2018 (UTC)
    • You and your time objections :P Thanks for the copy-edit, I wasn't previously aware that the policy for capitalizing human had changed for canon. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 01:13, May 23, 2018 (UTC)
      • You're welcome. Thanks for the article! Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 06:07, May 23, 2018 (UTC)
Ayrehead
  • In the infobox you can't just say prior to 3 ABY, as the battle could have occured in that year, just before the Battle of Hoth. Ayrehead02 (talk) 06:12, May 24, 2018 (UTC)
    • Indeed. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 11:16, May 24, 2018 (UTC)
      • You don't seem to have changed the infobox? I also think you could reword that opening sentence to be more succinct. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:05, June 3, 2018 (UTC)
        • I must have forgotten to save the changes or something, pretty embarassing. Ended up splitting the opening sentence. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 09:49, June 3, 2018 (UTC)
Imp

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