Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Battle of Hypori

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Battle of Hypori

Nominated by: --Lewisr (talk) 00:12, July 13, 2020 (UTC)

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~~Should "Acclamator" in the second paragraph be in italics?~~--Editoronthewiki (talk) 00:20, July 13, 2020 (UTC)
- Not really sure on this, so I just added the full thing --Lewisr (talk) 00:28, July 13, 2020 (UTC)
~~I think casualties should list "at least 1 Acclamator-class cruiser" instead of assuming there was only one~~--Editoronthewiki (talk) 02:52, July 13, 2020 (UTC)
- Changed --Lewisr (talk) 02:58, July 13, 2020 (UTC)
~~you could probably put "eventually the First Battle of Geonosis" in the previous battle section of the infobox~~--Editoronthewiki (talk) 02:53, July 13, 2020 (UTC)
- Added it in --Lewisr (talk) 02:58, July 13, 2020 (UTC)

~~There doesn't appear to be room for the image, so it would be better to remove it.~~
- Removed
"Sometime later, during the Imperial Era, the hulk of the Acclamator-class cruiser stood as a grim memorial of the battle." I'm a bit confused as to what you mean by "stood." Is there more context you can provide? UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:17, July 13, 2020 (UTC)
- I assume stood refers to it just was there as a reminder of the battle, kind of like how the Starship Graveyard on Jakku stands as a memorial of the battle there. How's it now? --Lewisr (talk) 14:56, July 13, 2020 (UTC)
  - Much better. Can you do some restructuring so that you're talking about the team first before specifying the timeframe? UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:46, July 15, 2020 (UTC)
    - How's that? --Lewisr (talk) 14:41, July 15, 2020 (UTC)
      - Nice work. UberSoldat93 (talk) 15:42, July 16, 2020 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 09:51, July 21, 2020 (UTC)