Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Battle of Bamayar

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Battle of Bamayar

• Nominated by: Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 10:55, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Third CAN in the Bamayar saga.

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

1. UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:25, May 30, 2020 (UTC)
2. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 13:29, June 1, 2020 (UTC)
3. Zed42 (talk) 21:16, June 4, 2020 (UTC)
4. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:36, June 5, 2020 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat

• A date can be added to the infobox (between 1 and 3 ABY). UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:24, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
  • With the offensive having a nine month duration, I can narrow it down to 2 ABY. Hopefully this looks better. Also when you're adding dashes use "& mdash;" (minus the space) rather than the dash itself just like with the ellipsis. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 11:44, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
    • You can use both types of dashes. UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:47, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
      • Ok fair enough. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 11:49, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
        • The second date note can now be removed since the info is already in the first one. There's also a grammatical error in that note. UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:58, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
          • Fixed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 12:06, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
      • Sorry to interject, but Ben is correct here. Articles, especially status articles, need to be using — / – etc instead of the character. Regardless of what the MoS says (which I will look into rectifying at some point), HTML markup is preferred to any alternative. Tommy-Macaroni 12:17, May 27, 2020 (UTC)

Anil

• To be honest, I don't understand what is going on in the first sentence of the second paragraph, and the placement of those em dashes also looks weird to me. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:43, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
  • How does it look? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 21:51, May 27, 2020 (UTC)
    • Much better. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:57, May 27, 2020 (UTC)

Zed

• The Galactic Empire's involvement is currently never mentioned in the body. Zed42 (talk) 03:03, June 1, 2020 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 07:40, June 1, 2020 (UTC)
• Galactic Civil War similarly needs a mention. Zed42 (talk) 20:53, June 4, 2020 (UTC)
  • Done. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 21:06, June 4, 2020 (UTC)

Imp

• Is any information given on what Twitch and Ajax did on Bamayar? Imperators II^(Talk) 07:47, June 5, 2020 (UTC)
  • Only the quote in the article I'm afraid. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{(Hello there)} 07:54, June 5, 2020 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 08:36, June 5, 2020 (UTC)