Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Baroonda

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Baroonda

  • Nominated by: Janomoogo (talk) 13:48, 13 July 2025 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Wasn't sure whether a quote should be used in the BTS section
  • Date Archived: 21:11, 14 August 2025 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 496 words (0 introduction, 64 body, 432 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 471 words (0 introduction, 56 body, 415 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Astrography, Wookieepedia:WookieeProject LEGO

(3 ECs/0 Users/3 Total)

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Support votes

  1. ECvote —spookywillowwtalk 18:21, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
  2. ECvote Lewisr (talk) 02:46, 11 August 2025 (UTC)
  3. ECvote CometSmudge (talk) 21:10, 14 August 2025 (UTC)

Objections

Lew
  • Marleyvane and Oba Diah should have context Lewisr (talk) 04:29, 1 August 2025 (UTC)
    • I've added that they are a celestial body/planet, I hope that is sufficient. Janomoogo (talk) 12:35, 6 August 2025 (UTC)
  • The BTS should be rearranged to have the current last paragraph at the top Lewisr (talk) 04:29, 1 August 2025 (UTC)
    • More specifically, it should be the second paragraph, since the publication info about the first appearance should still precede it. Imperators II(Talk) 06:19, 1 August 2025 (UTC)
spookly
  • (Review note) For ease, fixed some MOS things and added the Slice secondary region for you, but worth keeping in mind many AST will also need a secondary region added. Keep in mind as well that Wookieepedia refers to characters after their first introduction by last name, and that canon articles de-capitalize "Rebel."
  • Is the cite really needed for the Racer game's release year? Almost all video games are self-citable release year wise, and several other status articles that have Racer in the BTS don't use an extra ref due to using the copyright year.
    • I removed the citation, the year is shown in the copyright information on the CD case. Janomoogo (talk) 17:45, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
  • I think the BTS would be better off subsectioned by putting the first paragraph in a section called "Milestones" and the second being titled "The Racing Winner"; the latter of which could split the very last paragraph of the article in two, as it's quite long right now on default view.—spookywillowwtalk 01:34, 7 August 2025 (UTC)
    • I added subsections. Janomoogo (talk) 17:45, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
Comet
  • The comic's artist should also be mentioned in the BTS CometSmudge (talk) 00:22, 14 August 2025 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 21:10, 14 August 2025 (UTC)