Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Bafwizzy

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Bafwizzy

• Nominated by: VergenceScatter (talk) 00:00, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Worst name for a moon I've ever heard
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:AST, WP:FFGAMES

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Support

1. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 10:31, 26 April 2022 (UTC)
2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 03:57, 29 April 2022 (UTC)
3. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:11, 9 May 2022 (UTC)
4. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:53, 10 May 2022 (UTC)

Object

Brahawizzy

• "Despite being the largest of Chad's moons, Chad was still small." I don't think Chad was it's own moon, though that would be a pretty chad move :P Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 00:39, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Fixed, thanks VergenceScatter (talk) 15:34, 25 April 2022 (UTC)

Imp

• We add grid coordinates for moons, as well. Imperators II^(Talk) 10:04, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Added VergenceScatter (talk) 17:58, 8 May 2022 (UTC)
• Just want to confirm: does the source use the exact phrasing "huge tsunami(s)"?
  • No, good catch. The earthquake associated with one of the tsunamis was described as massive and for some reason I applied that to the tsunami instead.
• I'm not sure the placement of the second paragraph's second sentence works well. If it's supposed to refer to the absolute size of the moon, it should be further up in the article. If it's supposed to talk about Bafwizzy's small appearance in the sky during that pre-0 ABY incident, it should be reworded to be clearer about it. Imperators II^(Talk) 08:55, 9 May 2022 (UTC)
  • How's that ? VergenceScatter (talk) 22:33, 9 May 2022 (UTC)

Ayrehead

• System is currently infobox exclusive. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:25, 5 May 2022 (UTC)
• The last sentence needs rewording, there should be a when somewhere near the beginning based on the current structure. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:25, 5 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Both fixed VergenceScatter (talk) 17:58, 8 May 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 08:53, 10 May 2022 (UTC)