Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Ayy Vida

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Ayy Vida

• Nominated by: AmazinglyCool (talk) 17:57, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: WP:SWCT and yes I've been dishing out CANs too quickly

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Support

1. Imperators II^(Talk) 13:06, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:02, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
3. Liverpool92 14:03, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
4. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 13:41, 18 June 2021 (UTC)
5. Ayrehead02 (talk) 07:19, 22 June 2021 (UTC)

Object

Imp

• Please describe the color of Vida's costume. Imho it's not trivial that it's colored the same as her skin. Imperators II^(Talk) 18:29, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Added. AmazinglyCool (talk) 18:31, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
• Please document the {{1stID}} in BTS. Imperators II^(Talk) 19:28, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Added. AmazinglyCool (talk) 22:38, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
• During the chronological reordering of the body, you've attributed the consorting and talking to Med-Beq to both Lo and Vida, whereas it was previously just Vida. Is this still correct?
  • It is just Vida so I fixed that. AmazinglyCool (talk) 11:31, 11 June 2021 (UTC)
• In either case, that sentence's grown too long, please split it up.
  • Added. AmazinglyCool (talk) 11:31, 11 June 2021 (UTC)
• Please add a BBY date.
  • Added. AmazinglyCool (talk) 11:31, 11 June 2021 (UTC)
    • Judging by the Sources list, Galactic Atlas does not feature Ayy Vida. In that case, you can't directly source the date of her actions to that book and instead should write up a manual reference note that links the book to the events of Episode II.
      • Fixed
• Reviewing note: please be mindful of extra whitespaces. Imperators II^(Talk) 10:06, 11 June 2021 (UTC)
• On longer character articles, the layout consists of Biography, Personality and traits, Skills and abilities (or Powers and abilities), and Equipment. Going off that, it'd make more sense if you grouped Vida's physical description and the sentence about her outfit in the same place instead of having the two be separated by her biography. Imperators II^(Talk) 11:48, 11 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Done. AmazinglyCool (talk) 11:55, 11 June 2021 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• Context for Coruscant.
  • Context added. AmazinglyCool (talk) 22:44, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
• Please research and include when and where the Outlander scenes were filmed in the BTS. UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:30, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Added info from Mythmaking: Behind the Scenes of Attack of the Clones. AmazinglyCool (talk) 00:08, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
• BTS needs to include 1stID from Legends as well.
  • Added. AmazinglyCool (talk) 12:07, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
    • Where does the last name come from? UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:10, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
      • Same source, I fixed it up. AmazinglyCool (talk) 12:12, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
• Ayy Vida is featured at 4:02 in this video, where the actress reveals her costume was airbrushed. Please add the detail to the BTS, along with anything else you can find. UberSoldat93 (talk) 07:13, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Added all I could find. AmazinglyCool (talk) 12:07, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
• A quote from that costume video can be included in the BTS. UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:45, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Added. AmazinglyCool (talk) 13:50, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
    • It's unsourced, and some context would be nice. UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:57, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
      • Context and sourcing added. AmazinglyCool (talk) 14:00, 9 June 2021 (UTC)

Ayrehead

• The Coruscant Encyclopedia issue says that Hat Lo and Ayy Vida were taking refugee in the warm and welcoming glow of the Outlander Club during a cold and rainy night. It also specifically says Vida and Achk were having a conversation when the Jedi entered. This should be added to the article. Ayrehead02 (talk) 23:49, 9 June 2021 (UTC)
  • All added. AmazinglyCool (talk) 00:10, 10 June 2021 (UTC)
    • Please rearrange the body so that the info about the reason for Lo and Vida's visit is presented chronologically. Imperators II^(Talk) 07:59, 10 June 2021 (UTC)
      • Rearranged. AmazinglyCool (talk) 11:50, 10 June 2021 (UTC)
• Complete locations shows that once Anakin and Obi-Wan take Wesell outside, Ayy Vida moves to a different table to entrain clients of Hat Lo. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:25, 12 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Added.AmazinglyCool (talk) 10:59, 12 June 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 09:52, 22 June 2021 (UTC)