Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Artificial sun

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Artificial sun

• Nominated by: BloodOfIrizi (talk) 00:48, 27 December 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: here comes the sun
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:Chiss WP:Novels

(3 ECs/2 Users/5 Total)

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Support

1. Fan26 (Talk) 04:50, 29 December 2022 (UTC)
2. Samonic ^(Talk) 18:14, 29 December 2022 (UTC)
3. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 07:10, 1 January 2023 (UTC)
4. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 22:00, 2 January 2023 (UTC)
5. Manoof (he/him/his) 05:13, 3 January 2023 (UTC)

Object

Macaroni

• Currently, it reads as though Csilla rose and set like Csilla's sun.
• I don't think you actually need to mention Thalias seeing the sun - it doesn't really add to what we know about the artificial sun as a device. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 21:57, 30 December 2022 (UTC)
  • reworded
  • removed BloodOfIrizi (talk) 00:27, 31 December 2022 (UTC)

Comments

• no quotes available sadly BloodOfIrizi (talk) 00:48, 27 December 2022 (UTC)
• Review notes:
  • Trials is always capitalized.
  • Remember that the pages cave and homestead exist. Samonic ^(Talk) 18:14, 29 December 2022 (UTC)
    • yep, always forget them lol. thanks BloodOfIrizi (talk) 19:15, 29 December 2022 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 05:15, 3 January 2023 (UTC)