Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Ando system

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Ando system

• Nominated by: Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 16:47, 20 July 2021 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support

1. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 07:04, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
2. Imperators II^(Talk) 22:14, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
3. UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:51, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
4. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 13:53, 2 August 2021 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat

• Missing Star Wars: The Thrawn Trilogy in BTS.
• Please investigate if it had a full appearance in Legends. UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:01, 20 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Both done. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 02:51, 21 July 2021 (UTC)
• How much of the info in Ando do you think should be included here? Many of our star system status articles discuss information pertaining to the locations within them. UberSoldat93 (talk) 06:48, 21 July 2021 (UTC)
  • What would you like me to do here? Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 13:02, 21 July 2021 (UTC)
    • Is that what you were looking for? Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 17:40, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
• You have sourced the fact that the system contained Ando to Visual Encyclopedia. UberSoldat93 (talk) 14:13, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
  • Good catch. Fixed. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 14:45, 1 August 2021 (UTC)

LucaRoR

• I think that the article could use a paragraph break. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 09:12, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Done. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 23:28, 28 July 2021 (UTC)

Imp

• I'm not seeing what the secession of the Hyper-Communications Cartel has to do with Ando or the Ando system.
  • It's because the entry for it in Rise of the Separatists states "Aqualish Senator Po Nudo was the Republic's Junior Delegate from the Ando system before he defected to the Separatists alongside the Hyper-Communications Cartel." Would you still like me to remove it?
    • Yeah. And you should work that "Junior Delegate" bit in, too. Imperators II^(Talk) 07:26, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
      • Would you say Junior Delegate is another name for Junior Representative? Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 14:50, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
        • I'm not familiar with the term, so I can't say for sure. You'd have to investigate what does the source say about the position and what, if any, other sources use the term. Imperators II^(Talk) 21:28, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
          • I've checked all the sources on Po Nudo's page and found no mention of Junior Delegate, which makes me think we could probably assume it's the same as Junior Representative. There was also no info on what a Junior Delegate even is, so I can either create a page for it, or assume it's the same as Junior Representative. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 15:10, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
            • Do other sources call Nudo Junior Representative? And isn't that position and that of a Senator mutually exclusive? Imperators II^(Talk) 16:23, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
              • They are different, yes, and no, he's not identified as a Junior Representative. So I'll create the page for Junior Delegate later. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 16:47, 30 July 2021 (UTC)
• Same goes for last sentence; it's relevant to Ando, but not so much to the system as a whole.
  • Removed.
• The Nudo bit should probably read "who had represented Ando", right? Imperators II^(Talk) 09:59, 28 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Correct, added. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 23:28, 28 July 2021 (UTC)

CC-8

• The last sentence in the body reads like Po Nudo had served as a delegate in the Clone Wars prior to the Separatist Crisis. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 01:46, 31 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 01:56, 31 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 14:28, 2 August 2021 (UTC)