Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Albrae-Don system

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Albrae-Don system

• Nominated by: RocketLaunchJr (talk) 20:56, 10 July 2025 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 23:21, 31 July 2025 (UTC)
• Final word count: 143 words (0 introduction, 77 body, 66 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 102 words (0 introduction, 31 body, 71 behind the scenes)
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(3 ECs/1 Users/4 Total)

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Support votes

1. Provided the Braha objection gets resolved Lewisr (talk) 04:31, 19 July 2025 (UTC)
2. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 23:47, 24 July 2025 (UTC)
3. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:52, 25 July 2025 (UTC)
4. CometSmudge (talk) 23:20, 31 July 2025 (UTC)

Objections

Lew

• Albrae-Don should be mentioned as being in the system Lewisr (talk) 21:32, 10 July 2025 (UTC)
  • fixed, idk how I missed that before RocketLaunchJr (talk) 14:02, 11 July 2025 (UTC)
• Looks like the 1stm in Legends should be amended in the BTS Lewisr (talk) 16:55, 14 July 2025 (UTC)
  • As far as I can tell the 1stm is correct. What do you think it should be changed to? RocketLaunchJr (talk) 03:53, 19 July 2025 (UTC)
    • The Legends page says The Essential Atlas is (and is also a CA) Lewisr (talk) 04:01, 19 July 2025 (UTC)
      • Yeah i just realised I misread it. I just fixed it RocketLaunchJr (talk) 04:06, 19 July 2025 (UTC)

Albraha-Don

• Albrae-Don needs context.
  • Fixed RocketLaunchJr (talk) 21:53, 11 July 2025 (UTC)
• Repetition of "The system" starting two consecutive sentences. You should find a way to vary the wording or perhaps merge the sentences if the second one is going to be brief. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 14:19, 11 July 2025 (UTC)
  • Fixed RocketLaunchJr (talk) 21:53, 11 July 2025 (UTC)
• "rebellious world" is true but I think it'd be more beneficial to say that in the context of what the world is part of (and we Fang Zar was a Republic senator). See how I handled it in Ghorman. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 08:25, 12 July 2025 (UTC)
  • I think I made it work. tell me if anything needs to be changed. RocketLaunchJr (talk) 02:51, 20 July 2025 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 23:20, 31 July 2025 (UTC)