Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Air shrimp

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Air shrimp

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:06, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Someone requested some information checked on the talk page, so thought I might as well finish the article up while checking sources
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Support

  1. Air shrimp gumbo, air shrimp creole... Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2 (talk) 15:19, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
  2. LucaRoR CIS roundel (Talk) 15:21, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
  3. ECvote OOM 224 14:49, 1 October 2021 (UTC)
  4. ECvote Fan26 (Talk) 02:21, 4 October 2021 (UTC)
  5. ECvote UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 06:32, 5 October 2021 (UTC)

Object

UberSoldat
  • New Edition should be cited if it contains the same info as the original. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 09:16, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
Immi Shrimps
  • Does Galactic Atlas state that their eyes are brown? I don't think that can be concluded from the illustration, if that's what's being used for the color.
    • Huh they looked brown to me, but eye dropper reveals that they're black. Changed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:38, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
  • Grammar-related things: "predators like the rawwk which would chase air shrimp schools" should be either "predators like the rawwk, which would chase air shrimp schools" or "predators like the rawwk that would chase air shrimp schools". The phrase "travelers tales"—"travelers' tales" if it's multiple travelers or "a traveler's tales" if it was one.
  • The details about their schools would suit the first paragraph (describing them) better than the second (history). Immi Thrax RainbowRebellion2 (talk) 09:42, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
    • Hmm, I generally try and go for a more even split but it's not too bad here so done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:38, 25 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 06:32, 5 October 2021 (UTC)