Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/Ado Eemon/Legends (second nomination)

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Ado Eemon/Legends

• Nominated by: Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 03:15, 9 May 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: First Legends nomination
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:CIS

(4 ECs/3 Users/7 Total)

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Support

1. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 03:24, 9 May 2022 (UTC)
2. Hanzo can be very persuasive. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 03:31, 9 May 2022 (UTC)
3. — Samonic 17:48, 9 May 2022 (UTC)
4. Loqiical (talk) 05:24, 11 May 2022 (UTC)
5. Objection resolved via Discord OOM 224 16:48, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
6. A planetary ruler that destroys his own planet? Nice! LucaRoR ^(Talk) 18:54, 12 May 2022 (UTC)
7. Imperators II^(Talk) 19:50, 12 May 2022 (UTC)

Object

Loqiical

• "its ravaging" is not very clear as to what is doing the ravaging. Loqiical (talk) 06:25, 9 May 2022 (UTC)
  • I'm referring to the planet's ravaging. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 14:21, 9 May 2022 (UTC)
    • Are we able to change it to something clearer? The use of the gerund can often be confusing. Loqiical (talk) 06:55, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
      • Didn't really seem confusing on what it was referring to, but sure. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 14:39, 10 May 2022 (UTC)
        • Due to the nature of this sort of construction, it can be unclear whether the noun is the subject or object of the gerund. So sometimes it is just better to not use it at all/rephrase it. Loqiical (talk) 05:24, 11 May 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 19:50, 12 May 2022 (UTC)