Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/AAD-4 assault droid

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a comprehensive article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

AAD-4 assault droid

<-Omicron^{(Leave a message at the BEEP!)} 20:52, May 9, 2017 (UTC)
Ayrehead02 (talk) 11:38, May 10, 2017 (UTC)
Cevan (talk) 00:25, May 12, 2017 (UTC)
Imperators II^(Talk) 07:41, May 12, 2017 (UTC)
ProfessorTofty (talk) 19:03, May 24, 2017 (UTC)
Corellian Premier^{The Force will be with you always} 15:40, May 25, 2017 (UTC)

~~Since The New Essential Guide to Droids apparently doesn't mention AAD-4, could you tweak the ref note to show how you arrive to the relevant info from that source?~~ Imperators II^(Talk) 06:39, May 9, 2017 (UTC)
- Done. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 15:11, May 9, 2017 (UTC)
~~The year can't be sourced to the CSWE entry.~~ Imperators II^(Talk) 06:48, May 9, 2017 (UTC)
- Done. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 15:11, May 9, 2017 (UTC)

"The AAD-4 assault droid was a line of fourth-degree assault droids" - the wording on this feels grammatically wrong to me. I mean, I could be wrong, but I feel like it should be "AAD-4" was a line of fourth-degree assault droids," or "a model of fourth-degree asault droids," like the wording used in this article. I'll leave it to you, though. ProfessorTofty (talk) 23:27, May 23, 2017 (UTC)
- Its mentioned by both names, so both are ultimately correct. I've chosen to go with your suggestion however. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 03:57, May 24, 2017 (UTC)

Anything in the quote that isn't linked in the article, has to be linked in the quote, which I guess would include "day." I fixed it, but if you want, you can change it so that it's linked somewhere in the article. ProfessorTofty (talk) 23:27, May 23, 2017 (UTC)
- Thanks, I missed that one. I think I'll leave the specifics of the attack (i.e. end of business day) out to focus more on the article's subject. - AV-6R7^{Crew Pit} 04:02, May 24, 2017 (UTC)