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55 ABY
- Nominated by: ThrawnChiss7
Assembly Cupola 01:49, 15 February 2023 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 17:28, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 99 words (0 introduction, 80 body, 19 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 71 words (0 introduction, 52 body, 19 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Warfare
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Support
Imperators II(Talk) 08:30, 16 February 2023 (UTC)
Samonic
(he/him) 11:34, 16 February 2023 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 21:40, 16 February 2023 (UTC)- Assuming Manoof's objections will be properly addressed. - Thannus (DFaceG) (he/him) (talk) 18:29, 22 February 2023 (UTC)
Manoof (he/him/his)
17:26, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
Object
Imp
I do think that for a historical perspective you should note Thrawn's death date.- Not sure it's really necessary, added anyway. (Warfare dates the Thrawn campaign to 9 aby, allowing the date to be sourced to Warfare). -ThrawnChiss7
Assembly Cupola 02:05, 16 February 2023 (UTC)
- I think it gives nice context for what kind of historical document that work was. Imperators II(Talk) 08:30, 16 February 2023 (UTC)
- Not sure it's really necessary, added anyway. (Warfare dates the Thrawn campaign to 9 aby, allowing the date to be sourced to Warfare). -ThrawnChiss7
For context, you should also add the faction of which Thrawn was a Grand Admiral of.Imperators II(Talk) 13:15, 15 February 2023 (UTC)- Added. -ThrawnChiss7
Assembly Cupola 02:05, 16 February 2023 (UTC)
- Added. -ThrawnChiss7
Manoof
Can we get context on O'Pali Manoof (he/him/his)
08:08, 19 February 2023 (UTC)- We don't know anything about them. I gues we could say they where an "individual" but even that strays into conjecture. -ThrawnChiss7
Assembly Cupola 23:15, 23 February 2023 (UTC)
- We know they're an author right, that's enough Manoof (he/him/his)
05:20, 25 February 2023 (UTC)
- Imp has helped with this :) Manoof (he/him/his)
12:10, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
- Imp has helped with this :) Manoof (he/him/his)
- We know they're an author right, that's enough Manoof (he/him/his)
- We don't know anything about them. I gues we could say they where an "individual" but even that strays into conjecture. -ThrawnChiss7
Can we get a bit more context on the role the book discussed with Thrawn, we at least should mention the Vong and the position O'Pali took Manoof (he/him/his)
08:08, 19 February 2023 (UTC)- This isn't really relevant to the year. See 81 ABY for precedent on how much to include. ThrawnChiss7
Assembly Cupola 23:15, 23 February 2023 (UTC)
- Quite different situations for a couple reasons, mainly because the GCW was so impactful it needs no further explanation. Here you mention the book covers the role of Thrawn and some context on Thrawn, but nothing on the role he had. Was he an incompetent leader who was infamous for their mistakes, for example Manoof (he/him/his)
05:20, 25 February 2023 (UTC)
- I've made a suggestion on the article, let me know if you're ok with that, or feel free to tweak it! Manoof (he/him/his)
12:10, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
- I've made a suggestion on the article, let me know if you're ok with that, or feel free to tweak it! Manoof (he/him/his)
- Quite different situations for a couple reasons, mainly because the GCW was so impactful it needs no further explanation. Here you mention the book covers the role of Thrawn and some context on Thrawn, but nothing on the role he had. Was he an incompetent leader who was infamous for their mistakes, for example Manoof (he/him/his)
- This isn't really relevant to the year. See 81 ABY for precedent on how much to include. ThrawnChiss7
Comments
- Manoof: your additions are fine, thanks for adding them. -ThrawnChiss7
Assembly Cupola 13:53, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 17:26, 9 March 2023 (UTC)