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3743 BBY

Nominated by: Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:53, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
Nomination comments: After the failed TC and clarification, I thought I'd work to bring it up to status.
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Support

Imperators II^(Talk) 07:48, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:03, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
OOM 224 14:13, 1 October 2021 (UTC)

Object

Imp

~~Please fill in the relevant information in the infobox.~~
- If you mean the events field, per the template "events: Key events during the year. Do not include every birth, death, or battle." hence why I didn't include it? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:16, 9 September 2021 (UTC)
  - Surely you should include a death if it is the only known event occurring in that year.
    - Ok no worries, I'm assuming that there were no other issues with the other fields Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:52, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
      - Remember that all the fields in infoboxes need to be sourced.
~~"Inter-Sith Wars period" is a conjectural title, so please do not use it in the article prose as-is.~~
- Removed Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:16, 9 September 2021 (UTC)
  - That's not what I meant - it still has to be mentioned, otherwise it's infobox-exclusive. What I meant was you shouldn't use that exact capitalized term, but instead use something along "the time period between X and Y." Imperators II^(Talk) 13:32, 9 September 2021 (UTC)
    - Ok, it's a bit awkward using the dates but it doesn't look right without them. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:52, 10 September 2021 (UTC)
~~The last sentence of the body doesn't really make sense grammatically, can you rework it?~~ Imperators II^(Talk) 09:43, 9 September 2021 (UTC)
- Re-wrote it Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 13:16, 9 September 2021 (UTC)
  - "perished when the cargo bay of his starship and approximately four hundred of the queen's brood consumed them" — so both the queen's brood and the cargo bay consumed them?
    - Cargo ship hungry! Rewrote and fixed this Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 03:32, 22 September 2021 (UTC)
In addition, I'd like for you to try and reorder the information from TOR so that it's presented in chronological order. i.e., Hetuu and the Hutt did this and that, then something happened, and then they died. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:41, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
- Done Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 03:32, 22 September 2021 (UTC)
I've taken a look at the source myself, and I see you're missing info on the aftermath of the year's events - information that on older, longer year status articles would be placed into the Impact section. Imperators II^(Talk) 14:16, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
- Added the origination of the phrase and it's enduring for a century. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:26, 26 September 2021 (UTC)

UberSoldat

~~Does the Codex entry identify Nal Hutta as a planet?~~ UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:24, 29 September 2021 (UTC)

OOM

~~It's worth mentioning the reason the Hutt wanted a k'lor'slug here.~~ OOM 224 20:48, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
- When I updated it, I didn't think it was worth mentioning given the article's focus is the year itself and the events of their deaths. I still don't think it's pertinent WHY the Hutt wanted the slugs but have mentioned it was for a gala celebration (we don't know what that means or even if it was to be held immediately or in the following months/years so no pipelink added) Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 01:29, 30 September 2021 (UTC)
  - Yeah, that will do OOM 224 14:13, 1 October 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 14:13, 1 October 2021 (UTC)