Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/15th Deep Core Reserve Fleet

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15th Deep Core Reserve Fleet

Nominated by: --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 00:04, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
Nomination comments:

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Support

Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 00:13, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 22:04, 10 March 2021 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 05:34, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
Imperators II^(Talk) 08:15, 7 April 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat93 (talk) 09:14, 7 April 2021 (UTC)

Object

CC-8

~~Should include the timeframe of the Empire's reign~~
- Done --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 18:39, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
~~Needs to refer to Empress Teta as a planet.~~ Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 11:12, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
- Added --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 18:39, 7 March 2021 (UTC)

Imp

"Due to the strategic position of the resources and its position as a gateway to the Deep Core of the galaxy, the planet Empress Teta became an important stronghold for the Empire." — what resources? Honestly, I believe this sentence could use a rewrite for clarity.
- It doesn't specify what resources, regardless, sentence has been rewritten for better clarity.
  - On the contrary, now that sentence doesn't even have an independent clause in it. Imperators II^(Talk) 22:57, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
    - Forgot to leave something last night, but I think I fixed it. How does that read? Erebus Chronus ^(talk) 14:54, 2 April 2021 (UTC)
Just want to confirm this: "Despite this, the fleet's duties extended to serving as a vital checkpoint along the only known hyperspace route between the Empress Teta system and beyond." — does the source actually says the fleet served as a checkpoint along a hyperspace route? Definitely weird word choice here. Imperators II^(Talk) 19:11, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
- No, it says that the fleet's duties extended to operating a checkpoint. Fixed it to a more accurate wording. Erebus Chronus ^(talk) 22:45, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
~~Correct me if I'm wrong, but it seems to me that Nexus of Power is set during Palpatine's rule, in which case the dating should be revised.~~ Imperators II^(Talk) 21:59, 2 April 2021 (UTC)
- Fixed date. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 05:48, 4 April 2021 (UTC)
  - Doesn't Galactic Atlas also establish that Palpatine died at Endor? If so, you could simply date the date range straight to that book.
    - Fixed. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 17:54, 6 April 2021 (UTC)
~~The first sentence now needs cleanup, and I'd pipelink "Galactic Emperor" to "Emperor" to avoid the redundancy.~~ Imperators II^(Talk) 08:09, 4 April 2021 (UTC)
- Fixed --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 17:54, 6 April 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Please remember that subjects with only a single source/appearances should not include the word "first" in "first mentioned/appeared" in the behind the scenes section. OOM 224 ^{༼༽talk༼༽} 22:04, 10 March 2021 (UTC)
- Thank you! I'll do my best to keep that in mind. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 23:35, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
I am taking a temporary personal leave from the site for the sake of my personal health and happiness, and I expect to return anywhere from one week to several weeks. --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 14:41, 28 March 2021 (UTC)
Just a heads up, I will be handling any further objections for this nomination. Erebus Chronus ^(talk) 18:08, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
Huge appreciation for Erebus for taking care of things while I was absent. I'm ready for more objections. :P --Vitus Infinitus^Talk 21:52, 2 April 2021 (UTC)

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 09:15, 7 April 2021 (UTC)