Wookieepedia:Comprehensive article nominations/"Accu-Strike" integrated targeting computer

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"Accu-Strike" integrated targeting computer

• Nominated by: DFaceG (talk) 21:50, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:FFGAMES

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Support

1. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 17:58, 1 April 2022 (UTC)
2. UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:50, 2 April 2022 (UTC)
3. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 17:32, 6 April 2022 (UTC)
4. — Samonic 17:45, 6 April 2022 (UTC)
5. —spookywilloww^talk 23:39, 7 April 2022 (UTC)

Object

Erebus

• The authors aren't really necessary to add since there's three of them. Erebus Chronus ^(Talk) 22:42, 25 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Removed. DFaceG (talk) 04:27, 26 March 2022 (UTC)

UberSoldat

• A "helmet system" is introduced out of nowhere, and it's currently not clear whether it's from the device or the armor. "...connecting to its helmet system." UberSoldat93 (talk) 04:01, 30 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Further clarified, though context for what the helmet system is or does is never given. DFaceG (talk) 09:17, 30 March 2022 (UTC)

Manoof

• You should explicitly state that the device specifically provides targeting data, and I don't think saying it's a targeting computer covers this. Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:43, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
  • This information is not given by the source. DFaceG (talk) 19:55, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
    • It should be removed from the infobox if that's the case, but can you say that, as a targeting computer per [x] source, it provides targetting data? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:44, 6 April 2022 (UTC)
      • Added to body. DFaceG (talk) 13:26, 6 April 2022 (UTC)
• As a HUD can also have audio indicators as well, can you specify that it is a visual HUD? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:43, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
  • The article explicitly mentions audio separately from the HUD. DFaceG (talk) 19:55, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Addendum, HUD means Head-up display, and they are traditionally visual devices. DFaceG (talk) 19:56, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
      • I think this is fine then Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:44, 6 April 2022 (UTC)
• Is there any indication what this device is for? Starships, landspeeders, fixed weapons emplacement? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 11:43, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
  • There is not. DFaceG (talk) 19:55, 5 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Comprehensive article by EduCorps 06:56, 8 April 2022 (UTC)