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Thorgeld I

Things to do

  • Duplicate link(s)
  • Per precedent with astrographical articles, the location of the Thorgeld system in the Northern Dependencies portion of the Core Worlds should be noted both in the infobox and categorization.
  • References may no longer employ page numbers.
  • A higher resolution image should be uploaded for the infobox.
  • Any information from Atlas historical maps that don't explicitly mention Thorgeld I must be removed as extrapolation, per the Layout Guide. The population map doesn't explicitly feature the planet, so the population figure applies to the system instead.
  • History should be split into several paragraphs.
  • The info on the planet's (system's) population and its cities don't really belong in the Description section.
  • Per precedent for Legends astrographical articles, the grid coordinates from the Atlas should be noted in the BTS. This should replace the unnecessary bit about Thorgeld being in the Core, and in addition, the authors of the Atlas (wrong in the article...) should not be mentioned for that bit, per precedent.
  • Sources should utilize {{1stID}}.
  • The Mandel family mansion should be noted in the infobox.
  • Per precedent with astrographical articles, the use of preposition "on" with the planet's name in a source is enough to treat it as a terrestrial planet.

Removal of GA status

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