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PM-1203

Things to do

  • References 11 and 12. "...Star Wars Rebels: Spark of Rebellion, which takes place in the fifth year before the Battle of Yavin; and "Empire Day," which marks the beginning of the fourth year before the Battle of Yavin." and "Empire Day," which marks the beginning of the fourth year before the Battle of Yavin; and "A Princess on Lothal," which is the first known episode to take place in the third year before the Battle of Yavin." are not self-sourcing statements.
  • Additionally, there is no reason to ever link to a Senate Hall thread in a reference. If there's something in that SH that's being used to source this information, then that needs to be explained in this reference note.
  • The ref notes are also underlinked.
    • Completely rewrote dating citations from the ground up. All the above issues should now be addressed. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 06:54, October 24, 2018 (UTC)
  • "...which Galactic Atlas dates to 19 BBY, it can be assumed that the events of "Out of Darkness" also take in 5 BBY." — Don't assume anything. Assert it. Imperators II(Talk) 23:08, November 7, 2018 (UTC)
  • Bio should be subsectioned. Four paragraphs always make for two nice subsections with more quotes and images if available. Imperators II(Talk) 23:08, November 7, 2018 (UTC)
    • Added some new images, but couldn't find a suitable quote. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 08:58, November 16, 2018 (UTC)
  • Ref 11 is off. Imperators II(Talk) 23:08, November 7, 2018 (UTC)
    • What exactly does this mean? - AV-6R7Crew Pit 21:30, November 13, 2018 (UTC)
      • "As "Empire Day" marks the fifteenth anniversary of the rise of the Galactic Empire, which Galactic Atlas dates to 19 BBY," — this means that "Empire Day" is set in 4 BBY, NOT that "Out of Darkness" is set in 5 BBY. Imperators II(Talk) 21:36, November 13, 2018 (UTC)
        • I was unable to find any sources that concretely place the events of Out of Darkness to 5 BBY, so I've changed the article to say that the events decpicted in said episoce take place in between 5 and 4 BBY. - AV-6R7Crew Pit 07:59, November 17, 2018 (UTC)

Removal of GA status

Redux review

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a reduxed good article. The result of the discussion was Good article status kept. Please do not modify the page.

PM-1203

  • Redux comments: Reduxed per meeting 110.
  • Date added: November 21, 2018

(+3)

Support

  1. ACvote Good job, Anil. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 04:01, January 25, 2019 (UTC)
  2. ACvote Nice job guys. Hope TCW revival doesn't sent this back here :P Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 20:16, January 29, 2019 (UTC)
  3. ACvote Exiled Jedi (talk) 02:09, January 30, 2019 (UTC)

Object

Toprawa

  • For starters, let's crop out the graphic portion of that concept art image in the BTS. It's not really necessary.
  • And going along with the previous objection, all of that image caption's text should be worked into the BTS itself. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:18, January 13, 2019 (UTC)
  • I'd like you to check that the intro quote's punctuation matches the subtitles from the S1 Blu-ray. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 03:05, January 14, 2019 (UTC)
    • All the quotes' punctuation has been checked, and they all now have accompanying audio files. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 15:54, January 14, 2019 (UTC)
  • You're going to have to do something with reference 4, as that DB entry doesn't mention PM-1203 once, even indirectly. (Consequently, it's actually a (Picture only), which you will need to designate in the Sources list; I would suggest going through and checking all of those DB entries to make sure they aren't Pos or Imos, since the original author didn't seem to pay too close attention to this.) I would probably suggest creating a new reference note to manually explain that you're extrapolating this based on the information given for Fort Anaxes itself. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:46, January 15, 2019 (UTC)
    • I've checked all the Databank entries and created a manual reference note. Please take a look. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 05:11, January 15, 2019 (UTC)

Tommy

  • "PM-1203 was a key installation during the war," this is kinda misleading, as technically PM-1203 hadn't been created then.
    • I agree, though that's exactly what the source says. I think the reader is supposed to interpret that as the chunk of rock now known as PM-1203 used to be a key installation while it was still part of Anaxes. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:40, January 29, 2019 (UTC)
      • Hmm, that kinda bugs me but if that source says it not much we can do. Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 20:16, January 29, 2019 (UTC)
  • I think it would be nice to have Ahsoka's full name instead of just fulcrum.
    • I don't think it's necessary myself, since Ahsoka's name is pipelinked into "Fulcrum," so the information is there. It's just a stylized manner of presenting it. But I'll let Anil decide if he wants to revise it. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:40, January 29, 2019 (UTC)
      • Fair enough, I'm not bothered. Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 20:16, January 29, 2019 (UTC)
  • I've added some context for the Grand Inquisitor, but I think this sentence should be split now: "In the year 4 BBY,[10] the Jedi Kanan Jarrus and his Padawan, Ezra Bridger, of the Spectres returned to PM-1203 to draw the Imperial Jedi hunter known as the Grand Inquisitor away from the rest of the group, which had rescued a defecting Imperial Information Office worker named Tseebo from the Empire." Tommy Imperial Emblem Macaroni 17:30, January 29, 2019 (UTC)

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