Wookieepedia:AC/Meeting 119

Did you know that August is named after Augustus, the first emperor of the Roman Empire? Originally the sixth month of the year (hence its Latin name "Sextilis"), it was renamed during Augustus' reign, similar to the seventh month being renamed in honor of his great-uncle Julius Caesar. In the honor of these great statesmen, the August AgriCorps meeting, Meeting 119 / Meeting CXIX will take place on August 24, at 3 PM ET / 7 PM UTC. Failure to attend or leave notes will result in a reassignment as a gladiator.

Panem et circenses

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• Tolga (diff • review)
• Tutso Mara/Legends (diff • review)
• Rakririan (diff • review)
• Vune Willic (diff • review)
• Titterbug (diff • review)
• Iziz defense tower (diff • review)
• Jev Sunrider (diff • review)
• Kurt (diff • review)
• Ktriss (diff • review)
• Sunrider naming controversy (diff • review)
• Recon-PK series droid (diff • review)

Circuses

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• Daimlo — As OtterSurf recently admitted that he doesn't have Star Wars: Racer Revenge: Prima's Official Strategy Guide, which is the second most used reference in his GA Daimlo, the article should be probed for lack of verified attribution. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 20:55, August 16, 2019 (UTC)
• Galen Torg — since the medium in ref 1 is not listed under Sources, the ref needs to do a better job of explaining how the information is derived from that medium to apply to the article's subject. Imperators II^(Talk) 07:48, August 21, 2019 (UTC)
  • Just saw this now after seeing Anil's changes. He addressed this. Hanzo Hasashi (talk) 03:10, August 23, 2019 (UTC)
• Vuchelle
  • Remove link from History quote
  • After a closer inspection, can we not just say the planet was gaseous? If you look at the planet in the infobox image, those are clearly supposed to be gas clouds in the atmosphere like you would find on a gas giant.
  • Underlinking. And is it "task force" or "taskforce"? The article alternates.
  • The year 22 BBY cannot be sourced straight to the HNN article, which only uses GrS.
  • Consider whether it's worth using a cropped portion of this to illustrate Vuchelle's placement within the Pentastar Alignment borders
  • BTS unsourced. A publication date would be nice for the HNN article, the authors and illustrator don't appear to be mentioned anywhere in that HNN article, and the TEA sentence can just be removed. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:15, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
  • Update needed. Imperators II^(Talk) 19:25, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
• Boles Roor/Legends
  • General cleanup needed for linking throughout article. Fix redirects and redlink.
  • Digitize comic image
  • There are a lot of instances of multiple references at the end of sentences (ex: [1][4][12]). If portions of a sentence need to be individually referenced, that should be done so. Ref notes should not just be tacked onto the ends of sentences.
  • Article should have an Equipment section to detail his podracer. It seems like a lot of this material needs to be moved out of the P/T.
  • Infobox-exclusive information.
  • I'd like to see the P/T detail his little beads he wears on his chin tendrils or whatever those are supposed to be.
  • None of the BBY dates appear to be referenced correctly
  • Publication dates and author/illustrator credits would be nice in the BTS
  • "Podracing Tales" needs to utilize SW.com citation template in Appearances and referencing
  • Reference 17 seems a little too heavy on original research and presumption; i.e., "Roor's skills are also surprisingly low for what could be expected of a Sneevel pro pilot". Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:15, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
• Yeb Yeb Adem'thorn
  • Would like to see the CCG infobox image uploaded to higher resolution and quality
  • 32 BBY cannot be sourced to CSWE
  • Why does this need two ref notes? Cite by individual sentence portion if necessary: "He opposed Senate Resolution BR-0371, which called for the taxation of trade routes.[3][5]"
  • The Bio image could probably be cropped to center and focus better on the Swokes Swokes, which will help them look larger and clearer in thumbnail view. A more square-shaped image will also fit better in that article section.
  • BTS unsourced. Publication dates would be nice.
  • SW.com Databank template entry name needs to be formatted correctly
  • Ref 2 needs to use CSWECite. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:15, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
• Baxton
  • I'd rather see this description migrated into the P/T: "Baxton was a big-shouldered Human male"
  • I'm pretty sure neither of the ABY dates can be sourced straight to Fate of the Jedi
  • The Biography certainly looks like it could be reorganized into two subsections of two paragraph each. This will allow for an additional quote and/or image if available.
  • Fix redirect. Examine rest of article for underlinking.
  • BTS unsourced. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:15, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
• Zinn Toa/Legends
  • 21 BBY date absolutely can't be sourced straight to Annual 2011
  • Infobox-exclusive information
  • Underlinking throughout article
  • Why does this need two ref notes? "born on Glee Anselm around the beginning of the Clone Wars.[1][2]"
  • The article would look more presentable with an image in each of the two Bio subsections, rather than sticking an image into the BTS. As an aside to this, the final Bio paragraph is fairly large and could potentially be broken up, which would possibly allow for three subsections of two paragraphs each. This will allow for more images and quotes if available.
  • BTS is unsourced and should mention the episode's air date. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:15, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
• Tol Cressa — It is claimed in BTS that he was first mentioned in Knights of the Old Republic 12 and later named in Knights of the Old Republic Campaign Guide, however, The New Essential Guide to Droids predates both of these sources and mentions him by his surname. In addition, I couldn't find Cressa's name in KOTORCG, although I may have simply missed it. 01miki10 ^{Open comlink} 19:18, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
  • Found it in page 81 of KOTORCG. 01miki10 ^{Open comlink} 09:48, August 23, 2019 (UTC)
• R3-T6
  • Would like to see the CCG infobox image uploaded to higher resolution and quality
  • Neither the infobox or Bio instance of 0 BBY is referenced correctly
  • Both infobox and article body omit things like droid degree, sensor color (if that can indeed be discerned), and plating color (which absolutely can be)
  • Release date for film in BTS would be nice
  • Ref 1 needs to use CSWECite. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:16, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
• Roo-Roo Page/Legends
  • 21 BBY date absolutely can't be sourced straight to Annual 2011
  • Infobox-exclusive information
  • Underlinking throughout article
  • The intro seems a little large compared to the rest of the Biography size. I could see it being cut down by maybe 25%.
  • There's little reason for an image to be stuck into the BTS like this. I would suggest just removing it.
  • BTS is unsourced and should mention the episode's air date. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:16, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
• Jik'Tal
  • The infobox image should ideally be 400x400px, per policy. I imagine this image was originally taken from a pdf, which means a physical scan could produce the desired resolution.
  • In this instance, I actually feel like maybe the intro a little too brief in relation to the rest of the Bio. Perhaps a minor expansion.
  • There doesn't appear to be any sort of time frame presented for the events of this article. Can this not be gleaned from the source material?
  • It certainly looks like there could be a minor Equipment section to detail things like his robe, while mentioning whatever insignia that is on it, and his utility belt, plus anything else the source material might present.
  • Underlinking
  • BTS is unsourced. Publication date for first mention would be nice. Just remove the CSWE sentence.
  • Ref 2 needs to use CSWECite. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:16, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
• Jarvashqiine
  • Underlinking
  • I would say the italicized portion of this sentence is just unnecessary and can be removed. The dates for his life can be gleaned from his article if necessary. Alternatively, present the dates in a ref note without the need to state this in the article body itself: "...and it was as a Sith Lord that he visited the Jarvashqiine at some point in his life, sometime between 82 BBY and 4 ABY."
    • Depending on what is done with this issue, the date referencing isn't accurate or ideal anyways.
  • I don't really see the need for this sentence, which seems extraneous and superfluous to the focus of this article subject: "The Jarvashqiine was not the only shamanistic order in the galaxy—many species, such as the Ewoks, Jawas, Duloks, and Nelvaanians practiced such beliefs, often on primitive, nonindustrial worlds." Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:16, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
  • BTS is unsourced. I would say the last two sentences are unnecessary.

Forum Romanum

Expand as needed.

Acta non verba

All roads lead to Rome

1. Carpe noctem. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 15:06, August 3, 2019 (UTC)
2. MasterFred^(Whatever) 20:40, August 3, 2019 (UTC)
3. Imperators II^(Talk) 07:38, August 5, 2019 (UTC)
4. Hail Anil. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 01:12, August 8, 2019 (UTC)
5. In vino veritas. 1358 ^(Talk) 22:28, August 19, 2019 (UTC)
6. Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:19, August 22, 2019 (UTC)
7. Exiled Jedi (talk) 18:42, August 24, 2019 (UTC)

Et tu, Brute?

1. Unfortunately I'm out camping with family. Notes to follow. Tommy Macaroni 17:53, August 19, 2019 (UTC)

   Due to logistical issues, I might miss parts or the entire meeting. 1358 ^(Talk) 09:17, August 24, 2019 (UTC)

Writings from the Senators

Tommy

I may be able to pop in but if not (camp site wifi is hit or miss), notes as follows:

• Extend: Jev Sunrider: Still has dup links, date ref seems a little shaky. Happy to keep if stuff is done by the meeting.
• Kill: the rest of the old
• Probe: all new
• Anything else and Ayre has my bladed vote. Tommy Macaroni 19:30, August 22, 2019 (UTC)

Ecks

• Notes are per Tommy. Imperators gets my vote on other stuff. 1358 ^(Talk) 09:17, August 24, 2019 (UTC)

Imp

• Extend Jev Sunrider, kill the rest of the old stuff.
• Spare Galen Torg, probe the rest of the new stuff. Imperators II^(Talk) 16:51, August 24, 2019 (UTC)
• Tope wields my vote. Imperators II^(Talk) 17:53, August 24, 2019 (UTC)

Veni, vidi, vici

• Log
• Paperwork duties: Xd1358

Attendance

• AnilSerifoglu
• Exiledjedi
• Master Fredcerique
• Toprawa and Ralltiir
• Xd1358

Articles that had their status removed

• Tolga
• Tutso Mara/Legends
• Rakririan
• Vune Willic
• Titterbug
• Iziz defense tower
• Kurt
• Ktriss
• Sunrider naming controversy
• Recon-PK series droid

Articles that had their probation extended

• Jev Sunrider

Articles that were put on probation

• Daimlo
• Vuchelle
• Boles Roor/Legends
• Baxton
• Zinn Toa/Legends
• Tol Cressa
• R3-T6
• Roo-Roo Page/Legends
• Jik'Tal
• Jarvashqiine

Articles that were spared from probation

• Galen Torg

Articles that were sent to redux

• Gilad Pellaeon